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Rayhana and Ella’s persuasive writing

In this text, we will be talking about why we shouldn’t have zoos! Firstly, let us ask you a question.

Do you think that Zoos can be good for animals? some Animals will like to be free in the wind and it costs a lot of money.

In our opinion we believe that we should not have Zoos, even though they take care of animals.

Ella: I think that the animals need more space. An example is the enclosures, which are not big enough! They should be able to move freely, but instead the animals are held in artificial habitats that can be harmful for them.

Rayhana: I think animals need to be free. because Animals do not want to be in cages and be looked at.

Ella: Animals do not have to be looked at without privacy. They do not want to be held for people to look at, I think they need a normal life.

Rayhana:Animals might be sad and mad because their actual place that they Belong in the woods where they belong not in a place that They just be looked at. 

 

Ella: Animals’ actual home in the wild is not represented by zoos. Like they could have their enclosures decorated, but what if they have fake plants that the animals don’tElla: I think that the animals need more space. An example is the enclosures, which are not big enough! They should be able to move freely, but instead the animals are held in artificial habitats that can be harmful for them. 

Rayhana: I think animals need to be free. because Animals do not want to be in cages and be looked at.

Ella: Animals do not have to be looked at without privacy. They do not want to be held for people to look at, I think they need a normal life.

Rayhana:Animals might be sad and mad because their actual place that they Belong in the woods where they belong not in a place that They just be looked at. 

 

Ella: Animals’ actual home in the wild is not represented by zoos. Like they could have their enclosures decorated, but what if they have fake plants that the animals don’t need

This is a reminder that animals do NOT belong in Zoos. We should switch to alternatives, here is an example: Wildlife sanctuaries: protected areas where animals can roam freely in their natural habitats where people can see them.

So, will you take action now? Zoos can be places to look at animals but remember our reasons why we should switch them.

 

Animals like to be free and alive and People pay lots of money so the animals can be in a zoo

where they don’t like it or be sad and they just be looked at.

 

 

 

 

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