I have been learning how to write a recount this week. I made sure I used my feedback from my teacher to make my writing better.
On the 1st Sunday of the holidays , I went into Ōtaki with my mum to do an outgoing day.
Firstly, I dropped my sister off at work and went to Books and Co. I walked into the kids area and got a book called, Ivypool’s Heart. Next, me and my mum hopped in the car and drove to the market, but it was closed. Then me and my mum went to Hammer Hardware and I saw Katelynn. We chatted for a while before she left. I also got a free lollipop from my mum’s friend, Helen who works at Hammer Hardware. Finally, I went to the super market and got some food for lunch, and dinner.
The day with Mum was fun. I enjoyed seeing Katelynn, getting a new book, and getting to spend quality time with my mum. I felt very happy that I got to hang out with her for a sunny day.
