This week in class, we took on daily writing challenges to stretch our imaginations and practice new literacy skills. Each day, we were given a quick prompt and a short amount of time to write as much as we could.
Out of all the prompts we tried this week, my absolute favourite was one about two macines
Here is my writing:
I went to the airbase in the middle of the Sahara desert. There were two machines, A tank and a plane. I went into the plane. It had giant screens. It was spacious ; it had many little room capsules. It was awesome. I turned on the engines by pressing a button. My friend went in the tank. I lifted the throttle. Quickly, the plane sped through the Sahara desert. I was 5000 feet in the air. I turned on autopilot and watched TV.
My little friend was in the tank. I flew to 30000 feet. There were enemy planes following me but I activated the forcefield. Below the clouds, the enemy planes burned into flames. The plane started shooting down enemy fighters. It was world war 3 and I was in the Air Force. The plane flew through the middle east. The enemies were waiting but they were shot down.
Later, I landed at an airbase in the middle of the Pacific Ocean. It was a safe place. Sadly, the tank didn’t make it. It was shot by an enemy fighter. Luckily, my friend survived. I ended world war 3. They said I could own the ultra hi tech airplane.
When I was writing this, I tried to focus on Trying to make the story interesting and adding precision. I think this piece turned out well because I got out all my imagination and put them into a prompt I am proud of.
One thing I noticed about my writing this week is that I have gotten much better at presicion. Next week, my target is to make my words longer.
What was your favorite part of my story? Let me know in the below!