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Time sensory writing.

Last week we wrote a story about a time thing that sent us back in time I did the titanic it also needed to be roughly 150 words. we also had to show it not tell it so we weren’t able to use the words I smell or I see so this is it.

I’m stuck on a huge ship. There’s people everywhere. I’m on the deck now. There are about 20 lifeboats. It’s cold out here there’s 4 smokestacks. There’s gentle music from one of the rooms. GRIIIIINNNDDD. WHAT WAS THAT! Everyone on board panics. I panic as people scream. The sailors lock the bottom floor off with people inside. They load people in the lifeboats. By the time I get out on the deck again most lifeboats are gone. I can’t get on a lifeboat in time.I have no choice but to plunge into the freezing waters.

 

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