This is our writing I am almost finished and all I have to do is edit it.
I really hope you like it. The wrecked ship lay on its side as fish entered through the broken door. A purple and mixed pink portal was floating in the air and through it was a whole different universe.Clocks were floating, hundreds of clocks, stars and planets.As the fish swam through they intervened with humongous glowing dogs, who didn’t even seem to know they had just run over a whole school of fish.They just kept running. A plate of cookies and tea floated through the portal as a star almost fell from its hanging point as an asteroid of oranges shot by.
Dead body’s lay on the floor of the portal, blood covered the floor of the delicate portal. The body’s lay there waiting, waiting to depart from the world they were in into a different world. As another school of fish entered the portal, stars eagerly followed.They finally arrived at the destination. It was a blank white train station where they waited for something to happen. A pop sounded and a train arrived they all hopped on and yelled ’’GO!’’The train left with a groan as it slowly moved along the rails rocking from side to side.As an hour passed they finally arrived the train stopped with an urgent pull which pushed everyone out of the train and they just lay there spinning.
There was a broken window and a fireplace sitting by the window was a bed.Suddenly the fireplace lit up with excitement and music started playing as the fish danced. They turned into glowing stars and flew over to the bed and got under the covers. They closed their eyes and fell asleep.The fireplace went out and the music stopped everything was quiet except for the stars quiet snores as they slept.Then everything went dark.