I firmly believe that our school lunchtime should not be longer and that it should stay the same. Saving energy, behavior out in the playground and the importance of our learning are my reasons for why I believe this.

Firstly lets talk about saving energy 20 minutes of play is more than enough time to play games like Nine-Square Touch Rugby or what ever you choose to do.

Any longer, and we all know what happens aye Tamariki we start to argue get upset of fight witch takes me to my 2nd reason behavior.

Having a longer lunchtime means more chances of fights arguments and even fowl play om the courts witch leads me to my 3rd reason the field and court.

There is a more increased chance of getting injuries like road bruises scrapes and even broken bodyparts and some people like to go in trees like tarzan and get themselves stuck getting hurt.

With all that been said it would take too much energy for play and not our studies making us tired also the behavior that goes around increases leading to more fights on the courts getting bruises scrapes injurys even from trees. So with all the knowledge ive gave you please keep our lunchtime the same mr topia. this week I chose the topic of why our school lunchtime should stay the same. First, we looked at an exemplar about skateboards and then we worked though the ,introduction  ,paragraphs and then the conclusion of our topic.

I strongly believe that school lunch times should be long so we get more time to play after Netball or Kapa Haka practice. Teachers also could have a longer break and we could have more play with friends.

Firstly, having a longer lunch means longer fun! I mean yeah doing work could be fun too, but having more time with your friends is important too. You can also spend time with other people who are not in class.

Secondly, teachers also need longer breaks from their tamariki. For example  they need their own space and they could have more to eat well setting up the class.

Finally, having a longer lunch time means teachers have enough time to eat and have time away from their tamariki. 

As you can see from my point of view, it is clear that we need a longer lunch time so people have time to play after Netball or Kapa Haka, kids have enough time to play with friends and teachers can eat well setting up the class.

The purpose of Persuasive writing is to drag the reading into your opinion.

This means, we need to make the person reading agree with our topic

This week I chose the topic why lunchtimes should be longer.

First, we looked at an exemplar about skateboards and then we worked through the introduction, paragraphs and then the conclusion of our topic.

I strongly believe that lunchtime play should be longer. Our lunch time play goes for 25 mins! Most of the kids do sports like training for Netball! During lunch time a group of kids from other classes is practising Kapa Haka. My last reason is that we can spend more time with our friends.

Firstly, having a longer play time means that we can have enough time to play after Netball training. For example, every time the bell rings we can’t get water or go to the toilet.

Secondly, getting more play time allows us to hangout with our friends and talk for a while. 

For example, we can go and get a Netball and play half court then play a game of gutter board while the teachers have their break time.

Finally, kids that do Kapa Haka stay in practicing their bracket for Tatarkihi. For example, Whaea Linda keeps her Ropu in and goes over their bracket to make sure they know most of it.

In conclusion, having more play time means we can play handball or something after netball, and it makes the kapa haka kids play after their finish practicing Kapas.

The purpose of persuasive writing is, to convince the reader.

This means, we need to convince the reader to our opinion.

This week, I  chose a topic about Why lunchtime play should be longer

First we looked at an exemplar about skateboards and then we worked though the introduction, paragraphs

and then the conclusion of our topic.

Why should lunchtime be longer

I strongly believe that lunchtime should be longer because we get more time to play, more time to play after Kapa Haka and more time to play handball.

Having more time to play is better because you get more time to practice and play, and when you finish practice the bell will ring in 2 minutes. For instance when we are done training there is still more time to play touch then get a bike and play nine squares. 

Secondly, when we finish from Kapa Haka we can still have play time. Currently we practice late which means we get less play time, a longer lunchtime will mean you get to kill 2 birds with one stone meaning I can do Kapa Haka and play.

Finally, a longer lunchtime means that we get more time to play after kapa and play handball. 

As you see my point having a longer lunchtime we get more time, more to play after practices and more time to play handball.

This week, I chose a topic why should lunchtime be longer.