Ticket to a giant peach
WALT we are learning to read chapters. We had to make a ticket for the movie/book to show our leaning
I enjoyed creating it but I did’nt like having to upload it here.
Do you like the book?
The Boy Who Harnnessed The Wind
An idea that helped me connect to my world is “we were born in a world of privilege”. In New Zealand we have opportunities and access to resources such as education, which creates opportunities, unlike William he grew up in a small place in Malawi where resources and education were limited. In the time when William was building a windmill for the crops, due to the lack of resources, William had to use his intelligence and perseverance. Therefore we have to be grateful for the things we have. form
Planning Task
Statement: “Explain how an idea in the text helped you connect with your world”
Unpack the question: William Kamkwamba explores the idea that resourcefulness and perseverance can overcome his challenges, a message that mirrors the resilience shown by everyday communities facing economic and climate challenges.
Choose your main idea: Perseverance
If you just keep grinding, you can turn having basically nothing into making crazy cool things that actually help your whole neighborhood.
My overall argument:
William Kamkwamba’s story shows that if you never give up, you can build life changing things out of literal trash, just like regular people today who are finding smart ways to survive money problems and climate change.
Aspect 1: Persevere through challenges
Evidence: When William got kicked out of school because his family couldn’t pay the fees, he didn’t just sit around or give up on learning. Instead, he went straight to the local library and started teaching himself physics and mechanics out of old textbooks.
What does it reveal about my idea? This shows that true perseverance isn’t just about trying hard when things are normal it’s about finding a completely new path when the front door gets slammed in your face. He took total control of his own future.
The author wants to show us that a lack of money or formal schooling doesn’t mean your mind has to stop growing. They are trying to inspire readers to look for alternative ways to solve their problems instead of waiting for someone else to fix things.
Aspect 2: “Never let anyone doubt you”
Evidence: Building the windmeel
What does it reveal about my idea? This proves that keeping your head down and grinding means tuning out all the background noise and haters. If he had listened to the people doubting him, his whole neighborhood would have missed out on electricity and water.
The author is trying to tell us that big, world-changing ideas usually look stupid to people at first. They want to give us the confidence to trust our own vision, even when the people around us don’t get it yet.
Connect with your world: William Kamkwamba’s story is just like the regular people today who are finding smart, cheap ways to survive climate change and money problems. Instead of waiting for someone else to help
Authors purpose + Bigger message:
The Author’s Purpose: The author wants to prove that genius and innovation don’t belong to rich people or fancy schools they belong to anyone with grit.
The Ultimate Message: The solutions to the world’s biggest problems (like climate change) start with local, everyday heroes who refuse to quit.
“Explain how an idea in the text helped you connect with your world”
Planning:
1.Unpack the questions – An idea in the text that connects to my world is education, we have all the resources for school in New Zealand like buses, books, and much more resources, but William does not have opportunity’s or resources like this he doesn’t have a buses to take him to school, he doesn’t have any resources for school. This makes me realise how lucky we are to have people that care about our education.
NCEA Level 1 English – Essay Planning Feedback Form
1. Understanding the question
Tick the statement that best describes your planning.
| Skill | Not yet | Sometimes | Yes |
| I identified the keywords in the exam question. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I understand what the question is asking me to explain. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| My main ideas directly answer the question. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
2. Writing PEELA paragraphs
PEELA = Point, Evidence, Explanation, Link to the question, Author’s purpose.
| Skill | Not yet | Sometimes | Yes |
| I wrote a clear point that answers the question. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I selected specific evidence or quotations from the text. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I explained how my evidence supports my point. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I linked my ideas back to the exam question. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I considered the author’s purpose or message. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
3. Punctuation and accuracy
| Skill | Not yet | Sometimes | Yes |
| I use capital letters and full stops correctly. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I use commas to help my sentences make sense. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
| I check my spelling and sentence structure. | ☐ | ☐ | ☐ |
4. My next steps
One thing I did well:
One thing I need to improve:
My writing goal for the next exam practice:
☐ Identify keywords more carefully.
☐ Choose stronger evidence from the text.
☐ Explain my evidence in more detail.
☐ Link my ideas back to the question.
☐ Improve punctuation and sentence structure.
☐ Explain the author’s purpose more clearly.
Toads heaven – where you learn the coolest facts about toads ever!
THIS WEEK I have been learning about toads for my Fact of the day and I actually found out some really interesting facts about them I probably wouldn’t have known for possibly my whole life! I have put my learning on to this slideshow along with a photo and a funny slide at the end! Have you ever heard of a toad? I hope you like my slideshow!
The dancing rasins
The Dan sing raisins is fun and we get to pot raisins
Te Reo Maori Episode 1
In Room 3 we are learning Te Reo Maori. This is my first slide.
Dancing rasien
On Friday Mrs nocle put raisins in the sparkling water then the raisins we’re dancing in the sparkling water then she put raisins in the still water then the raisins drowned in the still water and it was cool
Our Favourite Foods
Our tamariki have today been working on their favourite foods boards using functions from the EE App. Our kids chose their favourite foods, cropped them and added them to their food board – Zeeko, Soraya, Hinemoa, Fayhe, Jennah, Max and Chyruss worked together to make these boards.
Mackenzie Electricity Assesment
What is current? What is Voltage? What is the difference between the two?
Current is the flow of electrons in a circuit. This is measured using an ammeter. The unit is Amp (A). Voltage is how much energy the current is carrying. The unit for this is Volt (V) and measured using a voltmeter. Voltage is how much energy is flowing while current is the energy flowing.
Here are pictures of my PHET diagrams, the first one is series and the second one is parallel.
Why are the bulbs in a Series Circuit dimmer than the Parallel Circuit?
The bulbs in the series circuit are dimmer because they have to share the voltage between each bulb, whereas in a Parallel Circuit it stays the same throughout the whole circuit. Voltage and current behave differently based on the type of circuit it is, because it either has to be shared or not. Voltage is a Series Circuit and in a Parallel circuit behaves differently, for example, if the overall voltage in a series circuit is 10 with 2 bulbs, then each bulb will have a voltage of 5. While in a Parallel Circuit, If the overall voltage is 10 with 2 bulbs, each bulb will also have 10. For current it is the exact opposite, in a Parallel circuit, if the overall current is 4 and 2 bulbs, each bulb will have 2 because it is divided by the amount of bulbs. In a Series Circuit, if there are 2 bulbs and the overall current is 4, each bulb will also have 4 because it’s all in one loop.
Here is an example:
Here are my Circuit Diagrams, the first one is series and the second one is parallel. I made these using Google drawings.
Dad’s Beard
What is Media? . _ .
We have been learning about what Media is. Media is all the ways we can send information or earn information by stories, news and online to a person or lots of people at the same time. I created venn diagram I made this by dragging and dropping the icons in the boxes. Do you know what Media is? Explain it in the comments!
