Once upon a time leina was painting her walls white because she didn’t want pink walls.

“My walls are beautiful ”said lenia. But Liam thought differently. 

“What the heck are you doing?” said Liam. When Iris got home from school she said “Nooo mum wheres the pink walls??”  said Iris. But oh when Irisis younger brother got home he threw a tantrum.

The end sorryyy its short

23/4/25

burnt cows milk

Scrouge

“Ruff!” Rustus growled.

“Quiet!” Dune said. 

Well you’re not too quiet yourself, old man. Thought Rustus

“Ok, on the count of three run for it, 1… 2… 3! They ran, and behind them all hell broke loose.

Goal: Make sure my sentences make sense when read individually.

There once was a frog named Quinn. He wanted to be a guitarist but he’s a frog so he didn’t even speak human language. But he didn’t give up because he was a Superior Frog so one day he did the unthinkable he bought a guitar. He started to get lessons and Quinn was getting quite good. He didn’t think he was that good but, ten years later.{I dont even think frogs live 10 years but whatever]He was a pro. He was entering a guitar competition. He  was expecting to come last or something close to that. But when he was playing on the stage in front of the judges he was amazing………# to be continued  

My goal is to make it interesting.

I hope you enjoy my writing

One beautiful night the little girl and the dog had gone on an adventure through the books. The galaxy was amazing, the stars shimmered and the sky was blue, pink and purple. but all of a sudden a tiny man with a top hat came up to them and asked “Have you seen the galaxy whale?”

“No, we have not sorry but who is the Galaxy Whale?.”

“The galaxy whale is a group of stars shaped as a whale and every 4 years it shows up in the sky and swims around.”

“Oh wow we can help you look.” So they went off and looked for the galaxy whale. They had looked for hours and they had lost hope. “We should just go home now there is no way we will ever find it” said the tiny man. 

“Yeah me too.” So they were on their way home when they heard a noise coming from behind them. So they looked back and saw the Galaxy Whale.

“No way it’s the galaxy whale!” They were very happy they had finally found the Galaxy Whale. But the tiny man had disappeared and turned into a little gift box. “I wonder what is in here?” said the little girl, so they opened the box and there was a postcard with the Galaxy Whale on it. “I wonder where the little man went”

My goal=  Goal: Use sensory details to enhance my writing.

                                       Foreverland

It was coming, she ran through the wood, branches lashing against her leaving scratches along her arms and legs.  .

 Christopher liked the wild.

He was often found hiding in bushes, smuggling baby birds into his apartment and climbing trees. He often dreamed about it too, this started with one such dream. 

Christopher was walking through the woods when he stumbled into a clearing, it was a beautiful clearing with birds sitting in the trees, chirping in the dawn chorus. Christopher walked into the centre and looked around. But there was something wrong, the trees leaves weren’t swaying in the wind and as he walked up to the birds they didn’t scatter in fright.

“Huu” said Christopher “what’s going on?” He bent down but he couldn’t feel the grass, suddenly something glinted in the grass, Christopher walked over, it was a compass. 

Christopher woke with a start, what had he been dreaming about? It felt important, but the only thing he could remember was birds twittering in the trees, hmmm well there were usually birds in the forest, oh. He had been walking through the forest, he had crossed a stone bridge and then walked into some bushes when he came out, he was in a clearing. But something had felt wrong, hmmm then he had seen something but he couldn’t remember what.

He could probably find the clearing, but why should he? But it also felt like something he had to do. Maybe it would be a fun adventure? Well if he was going to go there where was it? There was a stone bridge not far into the woods from the town square, yes now that he remembered it did look similar from the bridge in the dream. 

My goal-

Make sure my sentences make sense when read individually.

Use a thesaurus to come up with interesting vocabulary.

Use sensory details to enhance my writing.

Use figurative language in my writing.

Hook my reader in.

Punctuate dialogue correctly.

Write in paragraphs.

If you have another goal in mind, check with your teacher.

It was 20 BC, and the weather was predicted to be HEAVY rain for 8 months.

So along came some dude named Chris. He was going to save all the animals in the country of New Zealand. Except he didn’t know it yet. In fact he didn’t even know the weather so how would he eventually know that he was going to save a bunch of animals. Well lets just see how it plays out. 

Hey Chris, it’s school time you will be late, hurry up. We have a boat making class.

You are late, grab a chair and sit down, next time you are late, you will get detention. Sorry Mr Dan Fart Now balbalblablblblbblabkhbkhbakabhkahbakhbakhbakahbakhbakhabkabhkahbakhabkahbkabhkh alright you understand.

Nooooo.  

Alright Good.

Once there was a happy family on Christmas eve looking into a glowing box with a small Cphristmas tree inside of it. They were very happy that it would be Christmas day tomorrow. They had a very nice Christmas dinner. They went to have a nice dinner with christmas pudding. After that they went to bed and tried to sleep but they couldn’t fall asleep.

I would rather it snow cheetos because if it rained orange juice then when I swim in the ocean then I would be swimming in sticky orange juice, and I would not get to drink water. If it snowed cheetos I might not have to ski on cheetos because they could just make fake snow. And if it did rain orange juice then the snow would be made of orange juice and when it melts then the mountain all sticky. 

Today i leart how to use sculpt GL I made a 3D fish and this is how it turned out to look like. I am better a this than making mosaics on google draw.

Today I had to make a creature that can survive in freezing cold. I like dragons so I created a dragon that can survive cold using the programme Craion.

Where do you think my dragon lives?

Is it friends with the Abominable Snowman?

What do you think my dragon eats for breakfast?

Today I made a picture of a komodo dragon. I picked this specimen because they look fasiating and are huge! I hope you enjoy it.

Today I made my very own dino I hope you like it.

Today I made a cartoon Megladon on google drawings this is how it turned out.

Today I made beautiful mosaic of a Megladon head using the tool called polyline on google drawings. I hope you like it.

Today I made my very own uniqe feather cloak This is how it turned out like.

Today I made a poster to save the fairy fern this is what it turned out to look like. Save them please!

Today I made my own little Tuatara enclosure on google drawing. I added in a couple of things that I hope will entertain the Tuatara. Do you think there is enough things? What else should I add?

Today I clourued in an online octopus It turned out like this.

 tiger slideshow

Today I made a slideshow about tiger here it is.

Today I learnt about prey or predator and listed a couple of animals of what they are to a lion.