HRM My Dangerous walk to school.
Dangerous Journeys to school
Homeroom Blog Profile
I enjoy playing netball,basketball and rugby. My favourite movie is Alice in Wonderland,The game plan. My favourite song is Tennessee Whiskey and Stay by Rihanna.
My best friend is Shade,Seanna,Tayla they are the best people in the world .
SHOUTOUT TO SHADE,SEANNA,TAYLA!!!! XDDDDDDD 🙂 🙂 :0 O-O ?_?
My writing of dangerous journey to school
The cliff is a yellow colour and grey in some parts. I always hate looking down but sometimes I can’t help myself. There is always another group ahead of us and another one behind us. We are coming up to the part where it is really thin. Carefully, I pass the thin part safely then everybody comes over who hasn’t already. We are almost there says the adult in the front. We quietly cheer and then keep going after a quick drink. Then I see stones falling and one of the bigger ones just misses me. I hear a scream and then a child falls from the other group and then disappears. She says she can fly. Then she’s gone. Some of the younger ones carefully look over the edge but see nothing. The adults say to keep on going but there is a problem one of the kids bags has fallen and is on a branch just out of reach. Then the girl tries to grab it but a rock hits her head and she just lies there and slowly slips. I quickly grab her and pull her up and lean her on the wall. The adult checks her pulse. She is still breathing just knocked out. I am relieved another kid didn’t fall. We are at the last bend.
How I can save water
HRM Blog Profile
HRM all about me
HRM Blog Profile!
Rubbish Writing
|
Orientation –
an opening statement that identifies the problem, place, facility and/or defines the topic.
|
Do you know how much rubbish affects our wildlife and sea.
Animals in the wild and in the sea end up dying because they eat the rubbish that’s been left over from humans and their lungs get blocked and then they will think that they are full but their not and they end up dying from starvation.
|
|
Body –
points of explanation supported by examples or factual information
(new idea/point = new paragraph – Enter twice and indent (push tab once))
|
Did you know more than 100,000 mammals and sea animal die a year. More animals keep dying each year because some people don’t know that what they are doing is wrong. But thanks to the sea cleaners there helping half of our sea animals and the other half dies. When rubbish gets out to the wild it drys up and splits into little pieces and animals like to eat them because they think also food and because it’s shiny.
|
|
Ending –
a closing statement that draws the writing to a satisfactory conclusion. For example by summarising the main points
|
I hope you are satisfied with my writing and you are more careful with animals and sea animals like turtles and other creatures. |
Term ! REflection
Maths Grounp
Hi i’m Alyssa and this is my learning today was how to break number up to make calculations easier and faster rather than counting on the back. this was a lot of fun to do and it was so helpful to me because i count with my hands. i solve this by myself. bye.
