There is this guy who was obsessed with fishing, he would go out on the nearby river to fish every day he could. One day he went to a spot that is illegal to fish because the fish are poisoned by the air in that area but he didn’t care because he didn’t have anything for dinner that day so he went out to catch a fish. But first he had to find something to cover his face. He was looking for a ski mask or something like that but the best thing he could find was a gas mask.

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Whoosh! the water went up near him, “Ek!” yelled Percy as he flinched away to stop the water touching him. He was on a boating trip then he  was walking down the walkway towards the boats “Hey mum do we have to go on a boat?” Groaned Percy 

“Yes we do sweetie, now get on” they had araved at the boats and there was this man in a cap at the end of the boardwalk. “Good day” said the strange man. “Good day to you too sir” said his mother Percy hoped onto the boat, his stomach chunded when the boat bobbed up and down. Percy had dreaded this cruise ride, he HATED water. It was all because of a freak acciented that happened when he was very, very, small. 

 The sun beat down onto the little boat sweat trickled down Percy’s forehead. Looking around he saw that someone suspious in the driver’s cabin. Percy looked closer, the captain wasn’t at the driver’s set, HE WAS ON THE GROUND!!!! The weird guy grabbed the controls to the boat and pulled. The boat lurched towards the left and everyone screamed. Percy felt all the gravity leave him as he tumbled off the boat and into the water..

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The floating house  

As I sit on the balcony of the floating house watching the clouds blow away. As I sit on the balcony watching the birds fly by. I need to get out of this house I thought to myself, but how? I sat on the bright white pool chair, almost frozen from the cold breeze. People walking past like they don’t care, but I know that they want to get out of this place too.  

Waiting, and waiting, waiting for my brain to come up with an idea. Wondering how I’m going to get out of this place, and then finally I had an idea, I was going to make a hot air balloon.   

To be continued. (Didn’t finish in time).

 Boom! Sparks bounced off the ground as the ship lifted off ‘’ready’’ said Bean as the rocket passed the clouds. The rocket was shaking and the alien was biting his three fingers as he now passed the atmosphere. He had taken the dog for what he thought was a walk but actually a visit to another planet. The ship suddenly stopped. The alien had no food, no water, no nothing. Him and the dog were stranded. Without any way to contact anyone or aliens. The dog already missed home staring out the window and placing his paw on the image of earth. Beep boop! The alien typed into the little computer whilst humming in his language. He looked out the window calculating how far he was from each planet his answer was ‘’no way back’’.

Beep! Beep! Beep! Boom! The ATM exploded in Jake’s face. He was shocked ‘’maybe it’s my cash’’ he said, spitting a few coins out his mouth. The ATM was on fire along with a load of cash. He pulled out his phone and asked for a taxi. When the taxi arrived Jake got in and asked the driver where the nearest supermarket was. The driver responded with ‘’left left more left’’ and started driving to the supermarket. Jake was busy texting his saying he needed money since his cash exploded. His dad replied with a laughing emoticon ‘’of course’’ he muttered behind his breath. He continued coming up with reasons to get money before the taxi got to the supermarket but it was too late. All Jack had was a little two cent coin and some 5 dollars in cash. The taxi driver waited for Jack to leave the car ‘’come on’’ he said with a grumpy face. Jack walked into the supermarket with ash all over his face ‘’great now everyone is staring’’ he said whilst tightly gripping his pockets. He walked to the soap isle ‘’you need soap bro’’ said some random guy on top of the shelf. Jack picked up a random soap bottle and sprinted to the self checkout. He jammed the coins and cash into the machine ‘’come on come on!’’ he said, clenching his hair. The last piece of change fell into his hand slowly ‘’yes yes’’.

Vrr! Clank! Ding! The oven in the starship opened ‘’pie?’’ said the alien slapping the food on the computer desk. The dog jumped up staring into the pie woof! The dog shoved his mouth into the pie barking and happily dancing. The alien was working out how to get back to his planet; he struggled as he tried counting the stars. Raspberry mush kept hitting the aliens face. It was a distraction he thought ‘’I better stop this dog’’ he said with a grin splat! More pie hiss! ‘’The engine!’’ he rushed over to the other side of the ship throwing towels on the engine. Kaboom! The engine exploded beep beep beep beep poof! Smoke filled the ship ‘’aah!’’ he yelled running in circles choking the dog fell his belly huge he could breathe perfectly ‘’how!?’’ the alien was confused he ducked to the ground ‘’wow!’’

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My goal is to: Use sensory details to enhance my writing

The Vanishings

James was walking home from his job as a paperboy and couldn’t wait to tell Mama and Juniper (his younger sister) that he had got an extra tip from a posh lady who had storm grey eyes that looked as if a thunderstorm was churning inside them, but he was pulled out of his thoughts by a mysterious whishing sound that sent the hairs on the back of his neck standing up. He hid behind a corner of an alley before he heard footsteps coming. His mind immediately strayed to the stories in the newspaper about people who had mysteriously disappeared. His Mama had told him to hurry home when his job was finished because she was worried and it wasn’t safe to be out in the streets alone. A woman that looked a lot like the one who had given him such a generous tip, although it couldn’t have been her because this lady had the air of evil around her. He knew he needed to get out of here before she noticed him and decided that he would be the next vanishing, so he ran, the uneven cobblestones beneath his feet as he sprinted as fast as a cheetah to get home, he ran through the door of his small rickety shack and yelled “Mama, Juniper where are you? I’m home!” He leaned over trying to catch his breath when he heard a voice behind him.
“Looks like you didn’t run fast enough” Said the peculiar voice, he turned a round to discover it was her, the mysterious woman! Then she clicked her fingers chuckled and it all went black.

To Be continued…

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Boom! The engine had bursted Tasman had no choice but to crash land. The plane was choking on smoke struggling to breathe poof! Clutter! Bang! Tasman held the handles on the roof tight as he knew this would be a fatal crash. The plane was shaking, still struggling. It was only getting worse. Tasman had to be careful or else he would crash in the deep jungle. 

Previously Tasman was on a mission learning to fly dangerously but safe. His goal was to land at an old airport and retrieve an expensive engine for a plane that was being built. He knew lots about flying but not about flying through dangerous climates. He would usually fly over a small lake that boats would always be, it was his favourite lake. He would often take pictures from his plane and his friends called him crazy for flying so low next to the water but for him it was a normal every flight thing. The one thing Tasman was bad at was checking on his plane such as replacing the propeller or the tires instead he just fueled it up and went for flight. 

Crack! Pop! Tasman tightened his seatbelt ready for flight ‘’safe flight’’ said Nixon. ‘’Will’’

Tasman responded with tight hands on the joystick. He waited until the runway was clear pop pop crack! The plane sped up before lifting off into the air as the engine struggled to lift him. Tasman sat in the aircraft clenching the joystick tight and focusing on what’s ahead of him. His visor was dark protecting him from the sharp sun as he glided through the air. ‘’The plane is a bit shaky’’ said Tasman as he looked at the left wing ‘’what’s wrong’’ said Nixon. Tasman didn’t respond he just stared at the left wing his hands suddenly let go of the joystick ‘’Tasman!’’ he clicked back and gripped his hands back on to the joystick as he took a deep breath in and landed roughly on the runway. Nixon stood and watched through the old car window. Tasman got out of the plane and nearly fainted ‘’the wing is broken’’ he said with a shaky voice as he heavily took a breath in. He walked to the left wing and stared for a few seconds before groaning and saying ‘’I don’t have enough to finish it before the mission’’. He said, covering his eyes as he held the wing. Nixon watched ‘’I can fix it’’ he said staring into the eyes of Tasman. ‘’How much’’ Tasman responded ‘’10k’’ said Nixon as he pulled out his phone from his pocket. Tasman put away his plane for a while before closing the door and hiding it until it was fixed.

Present

Ping ping crack! Rocks hit the window of the plane Tasman still held the roof handles tight before panicking and holding his head. The engine started to hiss and the plane was getting closer and closer to the ground as the engine failed more and more. At this point Tasman had to start thinking before he hit the ground beep beep beep beep beep! The beeping quickly became rapid before the plane suddenly nose dived vroom! Crash! Crumble! The plane was ripped into many pieces Tasman flew out of the plane as soon as it hit the ground. His face was also shredded into many pieces; it was most likely that it was the end of his days. The propeller of the plane lied next to him like his last friend that would always be there. He had very little life left.

Next morning

The cave was cold and moist but Tasman was still yet to wake up. His eyes were closed like they would never open like they were glued together. He laid there silently but it still felt like there was life left. Suddenly he took a deep breath. He couldn’t move, his muscles were weak and worn out, his vision was blurry and he had to focus on something to even see it. He finally moved and held the wall of the giant cave before falling back onto the ground and injuring his muscles again. There were cuts all over his body and his fingers were all broken. It was a bad crash. 

Broken News

Nixon was walking around in the city flipping a coin before looking into the sky watching the rescue chopper fly by. He stared at them asking himself ‘’where is tasman’’ he stopped in a shop to get some chocolate ‘’whats the best chocolate you got’’ he said looking in the lollie isle. The cashier stared ‘’Tims’’ he said before pointing to it. Nixon picked it up and brought up the front ‘’card please’’. After buying the chocolate he sat at a table and opened it ‘’shoot’’ he whispered he realised that tasman would have crashed in the plane but he didn’t tell Nixon he was going he thought for a while before snapping a bit of chocolate off ‘’yum’’ he whispered before leaving the table.

Here is my story  for today!

and my goal Goal: Write in paragraphs.

So I’m going to write the first story of THE END  I hope you enjoy it!

The night was cold and the land was shaking. I was going down the street when it started, I remember like it was yesterday…

Three  days earlier….

“ Hey! Are you going to the school dance Ava?” Amelia asked me “um no I’m going to… nevermind”  I said trying to sound like I wanted to but I didn’t “oh ok.. Bye I guess?” she walked away and I was standing all alone…AGAIN um what am I going to now? I thought to myself wait what is that sound? I looked around It was the rugby team, all the people in it are tough and strong and they are all boys but there is 1 girl out of the team and she is really tough her name is Iris she is one of the cool kids and she loves sports and well EVEYTHING! swimmg, running, netball, you name it. everyone loves her and then you look at me and think who is her and then they walk away! my only friend is Amelia but Iris is friends with everyone! 

A DAY LATER..

I was sitting all alone when the dumbest thing happened. Iris came over to sit with me! “Hi! My name is Iris but I think you know me!” I stared at her thinking why did she come to sit with me! Like does she want to or is she going to bully me? I don’t know what to do! “So what do you want to talk about?” Iris asked me but of course I did not say anything! Then she asked me what do I have next for class and I said I don’t know and for some reason it looked like she wasn’t listening so I was about to repeat myself but then she sarcastically said “no you don’t have to repeat yourself. I was ignoring you the first time” and then she just left! How rude and then the bell went and it was class time.

AT HOME…

“Hey kido! How was school?” my dad asked me at dinner “um it was good” I said but I was lying IT WAS TERRIBLE! “ Well me and your dad have been talking about moving to a beter place, you know?” my mum said “ WHAT! But why? I’m happy here!” I yelled at my parents “look I’m not hungry ok? I’m going to bed good night” I walked up to my room and then the ground started to shake and the house was breaking apart! What am I going to do! “ Ava! Are you ok?” my mum yelled to me “YES! I’m ok, where is dad?!” my mum nodded so

I ran to a window and saw a house floating away and saw a person screaming for help so I ran outside to help them but it turns out it was Iris screaming for help so I thought um should i help you? Like you are mean to me and well….  “Help! Help me please! I’m sorry about how mean I am to you! But please help me!” Iris’s Voice ecoded all around me, it was like my only option was to help her “fine but you have to stop being mean to me” I said to  her “ Ok!” I pulled her up with all my strength, after I saved her we were stranded on a floating island.

 “So does this mean we are friends now?”  Iris asked me, I thought to myself are we friends?  “Ok we can be friends if you want to be” so I’m friends with the most popular girl out of school does that mean I’m cool too? I don’t know, I have bigger problems to worry about now, step one is to try to get off this ISLAND.

To be Continued…

I hoped you liked it!

Week 4 Creative writing

Goal: Use sensory details to enhance my writing.

I hope you enjoy my story

Donald woke up in the middle of the night to the sound of gunshots ringing in his ears. He got up, rubbed the sleep from his eyes and noticed there were no bodyguards in his lounge where they usually stood guard from any intruders. There weren’t any guards in the hall,bathroom, or spare room, meanwhile he could still hear the gunshots and he was starting to get worried! Then all of a sudden he heard a loud bang and the window in his grand lounge exploded, the glass cutting into his skin painfully, All of a sudden a had clamped over his mouth muffling his scream of surprise, and a gag was stuffed into his mouth while his hands and feet were tied, the rope was scratchy and ruff and cut into his skin. He heard his kidnappers talking but he couldn’t make out what they were saying, so he kicked and squirmed until he felt something hard hit his head, and everything went black.

Half Ocean Half City
Welcome to a weird place called half ocean half city. There is a boat and a tree, one side is wood and metal the other is blue with a bit of wood . There is light on and off on the wood and metal side and the ocean side is a fish or a shark there is a wood fence and a way into the ocean. Is there people in the wood side or does the thing in the ocean try to invade the wood side? The wood side looks like a place from adventure story mode from a video game. If I were there I could jump from roof to roof. There light we can see there might be apples on the tree, the boat might be fishing that thing in the ocean or going to land or going to the light, who knows.

I row to work in my suit and tie

Before I leave, kiss my dog goodbye

The sea is always flat

So I don’t worry bout

What could happen if I fell out

My briefcase is heavy in the boat

So I put it up front to keep me afloat

I love my job, the banker I am

I invented the Monopoly Program.

My cottage is on an Island

In the middle of Ireland

With a stunning view of the sea

I really feel it’s the place for me

I’ve lived alone with my dog

Since Margret left like a leapfrog

She wanted Ben

Way back then

She told me she was going

To get married to Ben Glowing

I cried for days

Went to see plays

About happy endings

But now my problem is with spending

Mama kept recommending

“Counseling is for you, now Kevin stop pretending.”

“She’s married now in Galway,”

“She visited Linda the other day.”

Mama visited every spring

Normally good news she’d bring 

She left a couple days later

Gifting me an app called ‘Dater’

I know what she was implying

But right now I feel like dying

This is my creation in maths the teacher made us create these creatures. My creature is made of :Head hexagon x1

ears parallelogram x2

body irregular hexagon x 4

legs 2 irregular sqaures

tail 1 right angle triangle 2 isosceles triangles and 2 equilateral triangle.

This Is JimBob

Ears: 2 Equilateral triangle

Head: 1 Hexagon , 2 circles for eyes

Back spikes: 2 scalene triangles and 1 right angle triangle

Body: 2 parrelograms, 1 trapezium

Legs: 2 Irregular pentagons

Aahil

mouth: 13 equilateral triangles
nose: scalene triangle 1
moustache: 1 scalene
eyes: 2 equilateral triangle
head: 1 circle

Very cool face thing.

My week 4 Creative Writing

My Goal is to: Punctuate dialogue correctly

Jackie loved his new kitten, it was so fluffy and cuddly just like a stuffed animal, but one day the little kitten went missing. Jackie was distraught and cried till she could cry no more tears, her Mum and dad tried to comfort her but she was just too sad! However the next day she started to think more rationally and decided to go looking for fluffy fruit bowl ( Jackie had chosen the name) So she put up little posters with a very accurate drawing of fluffy fruit bowl and ‘lost cat’ in big letters. As Jackie walked around the small town that she lived in she said to herself “I wish I could become a cat so then I could find my fluffy little fruitbowl.” Then all of a sudden a magic fairy magically appeared right in front of her, it was a rather small fairy, so small Jackie didn’t see till she felt something hit her face. The poor fairy screamed in fright before yelling “bibbity bobbity boo!” And then she magically poofed out of existence!

Old insect eaten skulls lined the fence atop splintery sticks. The fence was guarding a small house, The sinister stare you got from the hut was enough to send lions running. Like a bat was the house, scary and loud. Shrieks could be heard all through the night. But who owned this treacherous haunted house? 

Cornelios Darksmith lived in the house for he could afford nothing more. He’d invite his friends over, and rumor has it they decided to stay. Stay for months, stay for years, and never leave the house? It was a puzzling situation. For only one knew what happened at 687 Woodsville Lane, Darksmith. 

Crows screamed, people shrieked, and Cornelios Darksmith laughed. And on this hill in the middle of the night, things would stay the same, for years to come, people would come to the house, and no one ever left! 

Until one day, in the sweet sunlight, a cheery little boy climbed down the steps of the house and skipped off to town. He didn’t have a clue what a feat he had miraculously achieved. Rumours spread and questions formed. Who was this boy? What was his name? But the biggest question of all was how he got out of the old wooden house.

The tail of the old Victorian house.

An old wooden house sat alone in the forest, but at night, it wasn’t alone. 

“Aisling hurry up!” shouted Iris “We have to be back before dinner.”

“I’m coming, just wait” Aisling replied. As Aisling and Iris were running in the forest they heard a shriek as it was about 5pm. 

“Umm what was that?” Questioned Aisling in a scared voice.

“Uhh it must be 5pm, legend has it that when it is 5pm the old house shrieks, people say it’s one of the jack o lanterns becoming alive, but I don’t think that’s true.” Iris said in an eerie voice.   

“Okay but how do they know that it’s a jack o lantern, apparently nobody has ever been to it after that guy who lived in it and then disappeared?” Questioned Aisling.

“Yeah but people are just guessing, that’s why we’re going to figure it out,” Iris replied.  As Aisling and Iris were about to walk up the footpath of the old Victorian house they heard a noise going tick tock, tick tock.

“Excuse me but what was that?” Aisling said in a worried voice.

“Umm I don’t but it’s kinda giving me the creeps.” Iris said shakingling. They looked around trying to find what was making that noise then suddenly Iris and Aisling saw a shadow in the house.

They screamed “AHHHHHHHHHHHH!” Then they ran away.

“Oh my gosh what was that?” Screamend Iris.

“Umm I think it was a person” Replied Aisling while still running. 

“Okay that’s it we’re never coming back here” Iris demands “Lets go home.”

“The end” Sophie said “As this story has finished.”

Epilodge:

Date: 2043 January 14th

Dust filled Dehemson’s nose as he rustled through an old box full of newspapers. Come on it has to be here somewhere!  He started flicking through the dates again 2038, 2039, 2040, 2041, 2042, There! February 1st, 2042 the day they were going to announce their new project DRAoS, their little toy built to capture the most wanted criminals on the planet.

He grabbed the old newspaper and decided now was the time he would leave. No one who lives here will care if I take a few papers, I’ve stolen much better and more important things than this. Just as Dehemson was walking through the small department kitchen something in the shadows twitched. He knew what it was.

“Not now I’m busy,” he whispered to the shadows. He turned to a nearest window and climbed into the darkness and ran down the cold city street.

I didn’t really do any goals. hehe

Did really good today on my X Speed Test