Goal: Write in paragraphs.
The End
The night was cold and the land was shaking. I was going down the steet when it started, I remeber like it was yesterday…
Three days earlier….
“ Hey! Are you going to the school dance Ava?” Amelia asked me “um no I’m going to… nevermind” I said trying to sound like I wanted to but I didn’t “oh ok.. Bye I guess?” she walked away and I was standing all alone…AGAIN um what am I going to now? I thought to myself wait what is that sound? I looked around It was the rugby team, all the people in it are tough and strong and they are all boys but there is 1 girl out of the team and she is really tough her name is Iris she is one of the cool kids and she loves sports and well EVEYTHING swimmg, running, netball, you name it. everyone loves her and then you look at me a little weirdo my only friend is Amelia but Iris is friends with every one!
A DAY LATER..
I was sitting all alone when the dumbest thing happened. Iris came over to sit with me! “Hi! My name is Iris but I think you know me!” I stared at her thinking why did she come to sit with me! Like does she want to or is she going to bully me? I don’t know what to do! “So what do you want to talk about?” Iris asked me but of course I did not say anything! Then she asked me what do I have next for class and I said I don’t know and for some reason it looked like she wasn’t listening so I was about to repeat myself but then she sarcastically said “no you don’t have to repeat yourself. I was ignoring you the first time” and then she just left! How rude and then the bell went and it was class time.
AT HOME…
“Hey kido! How was school?” my dad asked me at dinner “um it was good” I said but I was lying IT WAS TERRIBLE! “ Well me and your dad have been talking about moving to a beter place, you know?” my mum said “ WHAT! But why? I’m happy here!” I yelled at my parents “look I’m not hungry ok? I’m going to bed good night” I walked up to my room and then the ground started to shake and the house was breaking apart! What am I going to do! “ Ava! Are you ok?” my mum yelled to me “YES! I’m ok, where is dad?!” my mum nodded so
I ran to a window and saw a house floating away and saw a person screaming for help so I ran outside to help them but it turns out it was Iris screaming for help so I thought um should i help you? Like you are mean to me and well…. “Help! Help me please! I’m sorry about how mean I am to you! But please help me!” Iris’s Voice ecode all around me, it was like my only option was to help her “ok but you have to stop being mean to me ok?” I asked her “ Ok!” I pulled her up with all my strength, after I saved her we were stranded on a floating island.
“So does this mean we are friends now?” Iris asked me, I thought to myself are we friends? “Ok we can be friends if you want to be” so I’m friends with the most popular girl out of school does that mean I’m cool too? I don’t know, I have bigger problems to worry about now, step one is to try to get off this ISLAND.
“So what do we do now?” Iris asked me, I stared off into the distance I wasn’t really listening but then I said something “um I don’t know how to get off the island” then a loud sound came fron the island below “hey! What is that sound!” Iris yelled it was Amelia! She had a motorbike rocket flew off around the island “wow Amelia you’re ok!” I yelled “YEAH! I’m ok! And I’m here to rescue you, and Is that Iris?! Are you friends with her!? Cool!” she looked like she was doing a little dance in her motorbike rocket thing but then I enterupted her and said “hey! We need to go! So can we go now?!” she looked kind of sad but then she said “ok Ava you jump on first then you Iris ok?” Me and Iris looked at each other like she was crazy but we had to do it!
Me and Iris jumped on the motorbike rocket, soon Amelia flew us to my house “here you go!” Amelia said happily “now I need to go to my house BYE!” Soon she flew off into the sky and Iris and I were all alone at my house “um sooo… what do we do now?” Iris asked me again BOOM! The ground shook beneath us “Ahhh what was that!” I yelled, then a rocket car came out of nowhere! The person who was driving was Pippa! “HI!” she yelled, me and Iris, looked at each other like… wow! “ Hey Pippa! Did you build this?” I asked her, “yes I did build this!” she said happily, then there were some people in the back of the car it was Aisling! “She looked out the window and waved and sitting next to her was Millie! She opend the car door and came down to see us “hey Ava and Iris” said Milllie, me and Iris looked at each other again! “How are you here?!” I asked her “I just am but I need to tell you something” said Millie
TO BE CONTINUED…