My goal is to hook my reader in, here’s my story.
As Sherlock and Watson were sitting in the meeting room with the fire blazing in the background and Watson going on and on about Lucinda saying her cat stole her Gucci bag. “Sherlock, are you listening to me ?” Watson says in a sceptical tone.
“Yea i’m listening” sherlock said sleepy he leaves the room shortly after he says that and finds lucinda in the hallway dead with a note on her forehead saying in cursive hand writing ‘ I the cat got that rotten old lady P.S she totally deserved it for feeding me horrible food that taste like toilet.’ “ WASTON Lucinda’s dead!” Hollered Sherlock after he said that Watson sprinted down the hall in a cartoon like fashion with many slips, trips and crashing into things.
“This new case will either be stupidly funny or just weird” quoted watson “we’ll start the case in the morning but for now what shall we do with her now” asked watson
“Stuff her in that closet we never use” replied Sherlock.
“Nah, after a few days it would sink up the entire office,” Watson replied. We decided to put her in there anyway and do a deep dive on this mysterious talking cat. We went to the house of the pretentious Lucinda. When we got there we found some pills to put people into a deep coma and make it look like death as Sherlock told Watson, his face was pure disappointment “looks like we’ll still be dealing with Lucinda’s complaints when she wakes up”sighed Watson. Then the cat snuck up behind us and knocked us out with a frying pan.