Malo e lelei Readers
This week Me and my class have been writing about our own fairy tales, When we had to do our fairy tales we had to use punctuation to it and the writing that our class was doing was descriptive writing it was really fun because could do our own we also had to use some interesting words and we couldn’t forget our full stops and our commas and yeah here are some facts about what I have done and learnt I well also put on my fairy tale for you guys.
Marion’s Questions:
What is your favorite fairy tale?
What do you like about fairy tales?
Have you ever read a fairy tale before?
Do you like fairy tales why/why not?
Have you achieved a fairy tale before?
What steps did you take to achieve this?
Have you ever learnt about fairy tales?
How can you do better if you ever do a fairy tale?
How can you do better to succeed a fairy tale
Do you know about descriptive writing?
- Last question.
Do you use punctuation to fairy tales?
My fairy tale.
TITTLE: peter pan. once upon time in this story I will be telling you the after story of peter pan. once upon time there was a boy name peter pan when he was little he was he lived in this little village named forever land and he never ever wanted to be a grown up so then all his friends the 7 boys decided to tell inkier bell to make a forever potion, so then peter will never grow but it didn’t work heaps years later peter pan became grown he had kids a wife and a mother in – law and a father in -law and the mother in -law was a old lady and the father-in law was a the old and the old lady was Wendy the little girl and the old man was tootles, tootles was sad because he lost his marbles in forever land everybody thought he was a psycho but he was just sad and Depress because he couldn’t fly to forever land because he had grown too anyways the children went to there rooms and slept for chrism’s but oh no they left the door open and the dad and peter and the grandma went to a event and tootles had to stay home and look after the two kids and then went to sleep after that a big loud scraping through the walls, then tootles woke up but he thought that it was just thew tress from outside so then he went back to sleep after that tootles woke up again and when and checked on the two kids and as soon as he oped their door their, their was captain hook with the two children he said ha ha and flew away with the two children in his hands tell Wendy and peter and the wife got home they were shocked to see that the kids are gone then peter went in the room and looked for the two kids but they were already gone so then something came out of the light and guess who it was inkier bell inkier bell came and knocked out peter with some fairy dust and then took him away back to forever land and then peter woke up to find him self in this little town surrounded by 7 boys and inkier bell then he got up and said where am I they said you are in forever land peter said I want to go home no you cant said inkier bell you have to stay here you are peter pan 2 minutes later we need to train him said inkier bell and the 7 boys so then they started to teach him to use his imagination to fly and have more skills 7 minutes later peter was officially trained he went to go and get his children back from captain hook so then he went to the pirates village and then there was his two children waiting siting with captain hook he said if you win you get to take your children back but if you lose you I have two keep your precast children peter agreed then the war started they thought and thought peter was winning captain hook was losing peter lead him to this big crocodile his fear and then hook fell to the ground the 7 boys pulled the lover and then the big crocodile head fell down and gobbled hook down peter won he said two the 7 boys hey I well pick who well be the leader he counted and closed his eyes he picked the cub boy to be the leader they all said why are you going he said i have to go I have a family to look after then they all understated inkier bell was sad but happy that he has a good life she also said you have changed since you grown but I happy for you peter went and got his got his kids and and they were so reliever lets go back home OK off they went back to there real word bye said all of them and they lived happy ever after and that’s the story of the after story of peter pan.