Memphis – Descriptive Writing

Characters:

Memphis

Ella

Gian

Legend

 

Brainstorm:

Me, Gian, Ella, and Legend watch TV and find out that all of the world’s satellites broke from a mysterious monster that haunts space. It turns out, The team of four are the only people who can save the world because everyone got wiped out by the monster.

 

Story Start:

 

Introduction:

I woke up and made my bed. I walked out of my room and lay down on the couch. The TV turned on randomly and started twitching. When it stopped, 1 News channel appeared on the screen. “Breaking news: Alien or unknown monster invasion! An unknown monster broke down all satellites in space which has caused them to plummet to earth and crash land leaving huge, steaming, smoking craters! Please keep an eye out for an alien or monster. If you are captured or abducted, call 111 immediately.” We were all sitting there terrified. Gian looked out the window and saw nothing. “Huh? I thought it would be–” “ROAR!” I looked out the window and this huge monster appeared! I saw a big black spikey monster with colourful eyes all around it, there had to be at least 20 eyes! We all hid away in the shadows beside the couch and began questioning what the monster was.

 

Paragraph 1:

After a while, Legend came up with an idea. “I have an idea! I remember a place where people launch rockets. Why don’t we just go there?” Later, we finally got there and sneaked into a rocket that was just about to launch. Then the rocket started shaking and we started flying. I looked out the window of the rocket and saw Gian getting beat up by the monster. We flew closer and heard something. “HULFFF! HULFFF!” Gian was shouting. “We should save him!” All I saw next was fire, then nothing. I woke up in a weird, rocky world and our rocket was broken. I looked around and Legend and Ella were gone. Then I saw Gian and he was walking towards me. “It’s be-en a lo-o-ng while si-ince yo-u got kno-knock-ed-ed out-t-t.” Gian said. “Wait… Why are you glitchy?” I said with a confused face. Gian started thinking. “Lo-ots of st-stuf-f-f ha-ap-pen-ned wh-en you we-re-re go-o-o-ne.” huh. Gian took me to the rocket to fix it. While we were fixing it, Gian told me what happened when I got knocked out. “The rocket exploded and we all got separated. Ella and Legend flew to a watery planet and some of the rocket pieces flew there too. I ended up with you. Some pieces flew here with us. If only we had a way to get to the others for more pieces.”

 

Paragraph 2:

We ended up making half of the rocket with a few extra pieces. Meanwhile, Ella and Legend made a quarter of a rocket and some missing pieces. They were thinking of a way to get to us and never got any ideas. Back to us, we were able to fly the rocket without half of it and tried to find them. “HEYYY! IFS FEM!” Ella was shouting from far away. She was also waving at us. We flew closer to them and saw the other piece of the rocket. We landed and told them that we needed the other part of the rocket. But Ella had a better idea. “Why don’t we use me and Legend’s piece as a weapon instead? We can make your part into a small rocket and attach small firearms to it. Then we can defeat the monster”. 

 

Conclusion:

After a while, we remade the rocket but with strong firearms and flew to the monster. “TAKE THIS!” Ella said and blasted some bullets to the monster but the monster just ate them. The plan wasn’t working. “Why don’t we just shoot the whole firearm at it?” Legend said. So we detached the left firearm so it was floating and shot it to the monster using bullets from the right one. The monster got angry and chased us. We flew away while shooting at it. Suddenly, the monster exploded. We were confused. But then we found out that we defeated the monster! We were all celebrating but then, “Wait… I just remembered that we still have to fix the satellite problem.” I said. We flew back to earth and some people greeted us and said that they just finished fixing the satellites. After all of that happened, we went back to normal.

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