MY MONSTER WRITING!!!! Enjoy!

Hii! we are learning  about  Adjectives  ,Vivid Verbs,Dialogue, actions in our writing enjoy!

the monster stepped out with BIG purple eyes and sharp teeth the size of a school bus! We started to step back 

 while me and Rio were shivering like a milk frothier. We were sweating so much we could fill up two jugs filled right to the brim. We were terrified!

We started to run but then the monster leaped forward and tried to eat us! We had the key in our hand. We were trying to find somewhere to use it but we couldn’t

Find anything. Meanwhile the monster was getting so close we could feel him breathing on us.

We finally found a place to put the key in. It was a big door probably to the exit  or another room we could hide in. But we couldn’t  find the key. Rio had it in his hand so I asked him, “where’s the key?” 

“ I don’t know, I thought you had it, we lost it.” Now was the end for us….

The monster was getting closer while me and Rio were calling “HELP! HELP!” 

 

Someone must have heard us because we heard “ Hello? Is someone there? Follow my voice and get out!”

I was running as fast as I could but Rio was not as fast because he is a bit younger than me so he said “ You stay behind and I will distract the monster! “Okay! “ I said “see you at the exit!”

Rio was still distracting the monster and I finally found the key. It turned out I did have it. I ran to the door that had  a key hole on it feeling very rushed

and finally escaped. Rio was running as fast as he could and we escaped. “That was a close one!” I said “Yep definitely” Rio said with a sigh of relief.

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Swimming at the Beach

We went to the beach.

We learnt about water safety with life guards

We looked at everything the life guards use to rescue people.

Then we went for a swim between the flags. The waves were fun and the water felt nice.

It was a awesome day!

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The Biggist Monster!

The monster has bubbly blue eyes.The monster has blood all down her. I felt terrified. She did a giant growl. I held the key as tight as I ever could. “Follow me!” I yelled !!! Leo took his friend to a different escape route. I went to a different escape route and the last thing I heard was a growl.

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Doug – petrified

You are Mitch, balanced on the rafter in the shed. The Malley twins are lunging at you. Inside the speech bubble, write down the thoughts racing through your mind in that single moment before you jump.



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