WALT use our knowledge of narratives to create our own story
Hi guys for the past two weeks my writing group has been writing about 4 pictures .I have rote a story about a dog . On a hot day in Australia a bush fire was starting . It was a ginormous fire .Joe was ZOOMING though the fire . Joe was a big dog he had a rose like red collar , deep blue eyes and a bright pink tongue. He was a Detection dog
One day while Joe was working hard he heard lots of sounds . screaming sounds Joe was very curious . So he bared at his owner his said ” Okay Joe ” .Joe wigged his tail his owner put his fire proof dog shoes on . He walked through the forest Joe smalt fire . Joe started to run as fart as legs could go but joe didn’t see the deep hole in the ground . Joe fell through the deep dark hole , Joe hurt his paw . Joe looked around .
He found a dirty mole . Joe was so excited . Joe followed the mole through it’s tunnel Joe could’t follow the mole because of his hurt paw .So he used his sense of smell .Joe smelt fresh air so Joe dug his way out it was very sore. Joe got out of the very thick hole Joe was covered in mud but he got out in the end .
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