My Writing Task

This week we had to make a story about a twist villian and here is mine!

 

I finally made it to the temple of DOOOOM with my best friend Revol Yenom he’s been my best friend ever since 3 months ago when we both met each other in the desert looking for the temple now we await at its gates fear sticking to my skin as we walk in it seems that we are not the first go to in this temple there are at least 4 skeletons with at least 5 arrows in them this is not a nice sight Revol Yenom screams as he sees them he usually isn’t very brave or strong but his company is fine enough we see a long corridor lightly lit by the orange flicker of torches we walk down each step with extra precaution then I see a very weird step light it’s slightly in the air I carefully walk away from it but then I hear “CLick” as Revol had stepped on it then we hear a million arrows shooting from behind “RUNN”

 

 I yell as we fumble down the stairway right as that happens a arrow goes right past my face leaving me quite a shock I shiver sending heebeegeebees down my spine then the next room it’s dark and bleak there is a echo of light coming from the roof I see a gaping hole in front of me it seems to go down forever with some pillars making it look like we will have to jump we start hopping and Revol seems to be able to to it very well I see the last few steps to the treasure! I almost make the second to last step but then the collum I was using made me slip I star falling down as the gaping void eats me but then Revol grabs me by my hand he pulls  me up and we walk down this long corridor the treasure it’s as much as we would hope for and more! There is also a cliff facing the chest but we manoeuvre towards it then suddenly out of the blue I feel me getting pushed its revol I hang onto the cliff as he says “THank you for the treasure so i’ll have to say goodbye” as he says that he stomps on my foot sending me plummeting down the hole as all I feel is darkness as become one of the thousands of skeletons down here the end…

 

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