Hi blogger friends .
This week for writting we have been focsing on nartives .
I have re writted a story called were the wild things are , here is a little summrie on the book Max was beening norty so we went to were the wild things are so he travled for year but he missed home so he went back to his mum .
So I have made the end ten times diffrent and better . Have a small think on what this writting is about .
In This I have learnt lots of thing like what a navtive it is a tip of fixon story so here is my finish work
Max was getting lonely so he gave up of where the wild things Are. He could smell the delicious diner from the window sill as he walked through the forest Then he looked at the misty stinky forest so he said I GIVE UP I AM LIVING AND NEVER COMING BACK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So he sailed for weeks, days and many YEARS! He could feel his soft pillow mushing like a marshmallow in A pile of flowers !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! His dinner was smelling like all his favorite food put together. And his dinner was still hot !!!!! But Then he started to miss the wild things so what he did was He apologized to his mum. ‘’I am sorry mum’’, he said. ‘’ Me too’’, his mum said. So they went on the boat for years With his mum and the moved to where the wild things are And his mum was the Queen and he was the King . Teeth apologize to the wild things And so mum and max turned into wild things max was part wolf and part cow and mum was part lion because she got so mad and part tiger and they like being wild things and they lived happily ever after. THE END