Quick write W5

If I could invent anything,what would it be?

A button that can summon anything you can think of.Think of it click the button and 1 million dollars,click it again a car then a house.It would be cool to have a button that can summon anything.but we cant do that because magic.

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writing term 1 week 3

I am learning to:

    • Write a Recount using the correct format.
    • Provide feedback about a classmate’s writing that is positive, thoughtful, and helpful.
  • Assess our own writing against the Structure & Language criteria in the writing rubric.

Assess a classmate’s writing against the Structure & Language criteria in the writing rubric

 

(A)  Write a recount about something interesting that has happened so far in 2024. This could be at school, at home or somewhere else.

(B)  Think up a great title for your recount

(C)  Your recount must have at least three paragraphs:

  • The Reveal
  • The Events
  • The Ending

(D)  You may decide to have more than one Events paragraph.

(E)  Make sure to leave a line between each paragraph in the final version of your recount.

 

Here is my writing:

The Under 15’s softball team and I went swimming in the ocean at the beach at Timaru; Saturday evening filled with fun memories. Splashing each other in the eyes with salt water, stealing the coach’s crocs and jumping into waves and just about drowning were all spectacular memories that we will all remember forever.

 

After a long day of playing softball games and running around, we made it back to the cabins. Everyone sat down to relax when we were called into tanias room, we had to get ready for the beach? I sighed as I headed back, my legs felt tight and all I wanted to do was sit down and relax. I gathered my supplies and headed to avalons car. We drove down to Caroline Bay and started to get changed to go swimming. The sand was burning hot, it felt like we were stepping on hot, bitter lava. My hair felt warm to the touch from staying outside for so long. Once finished, I sprinted to the cold, refreshing water, I leaped into the oncoming waves, swimming out to the other girls. I got out and started to splash the other girls and play Marco Polo. The coach started to chase a girl named Aria out towards us and threw us her croc and yelled “don’t give it back!” We started to throw the croc around while the coach desperately, trying to take it back. 

 

After around half an hour, the sun started to set so we had to head home because we were going to have chinese for dinner. After trying to drown each other, we finally got out of the water. It was an amazing refreshment and all the memories will definitely stick with us.

 

Mr Mitchell gave me an R5

My next steps are to be more careful with my punctuation (especially capitals for people’s names and apostrophes).

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I got a job doing the paper run.

Last week I got told by my brother that I will take of doing the paper run and get the paper to give it to 14 houses. and my brother told me some trickes and what in some situations if the thing that I need to give the papers on my bike and I can buy stuff with my 50$ pay every two weeks I will save up $100 dollers to buy the stuff I need and I will use my bike to go around to to the houses

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Quick write If you could invent anything, what would it be?

Robot

The robot can store stuff like kitchen knives chicken noodles and more.  When you want to grab something but you are too lazy to do it the robot can grab it for you.  The robot can also be programed so you can say unlock car it will unlock the car.  It can hold your phone so you can take pictures and all you need to do is say take picture or video and if you want to stop recording just say stop.  If you want to type something up on google you can just say hey (robots name) type up what this is and tell me what it is.  This is what it looks like

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create task 2 week 5 term 1

hello bloggers!

for week 5 and term 3 i have done a poster about seals and i have added the most interesting facts for me and they might be yours and also its me Prab who made this blog and also  here is a picture of my work and also if i have gotten any thing wrong our if i need any improving our any thing else pleas tell me other than that pls comment and like and bye

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T1 Week 5

Hi bloggers

today we did a brainstorm, the book that I did is The jungle in my garden. We had to read it. Then we wrote 3 facts from the book. After that we had to do a fact from the scaffolding text. We also had to do a fact from the commentary text and also a fact from the challenge text. Here is my brain storm. Bye

 

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