WALT: empathise
“put yourself in their shoes” we were pretending to be the little kid
WALT: Show not tell using out 5 senses
“paint a picture in the readers head”
I can see a black gorilla sitting in front of me. He feels so heavy my legs are screaming for help! In the corner of my eye lights are hanging from a clear rope. I can hear deep breathing like a gust of wind. I can smell mud, there is also a taste of stale mud lingering in the air.
“Is he going to kill me?” I ask myself.
