WALT empathise “put yourself in their shoes” – we were pretending to be the little kid
WALT show not tell using our 5 senses “paint a picture in the readers head”
A big black gorilla stared into my eyes. My body started shaking as I looked at him. His breath was so loud, and stinky like mud. Then he came closer and closer and closer until I realized he has a knife in his hand. As he got closer he lifted up the knife and he was about to swing at me. Tears started dripping down my cheek.
“Oh no! I’m going to die!”
