Walt: Empathise ”put yourself in their shoes”
we were pretending to be the little kid
Walt: show not tell using our 5 senses.”paint a picture in the readers head.
I woke up to a heavy feeling on my legs, suddenly there was a dark shadow lingering….
My eyes caught the light that appeared on the other side of the room.
As I was looking forward I saw a big, black, hairy, gorilla in my life integrating me with the loudest, gust, of breeze ever.
As my stomach was tingling I felt goosebumps slowly coming to my trembling body.
How did he get here? I wondered.
