It was a calm quiet night, there was not a ripple to be seen in the lake.. The trees were as still as a statue. The fish in the lake were sleeping, owls hooting to their little ones. The full moon made it all more eerie.
This night something terrible happened to a 14 year old girl, Eclipse, and her friends.
I will tell you this story now.
Eclipse, a brown-eyed, curly umber hair, tanned skin teenager, was in the lounge, in a circle, playing the card game ‘Uno’ with her friends Bella and Ila… “What colour now?” asked Bella. “Re-” Said Eclipse then they heard murmuring and yelling. Ila Said “What was that?!”, “I will go check it out, I’ll be right back.” Replied Eclipse. Bella said “While Eclipse goes to check, let’s carry on with our game.” Ila agreed. “Sooooo, what do you think that murmuring was?” Said Ila, “I actually, don’t know” Replied Bella, “What do you think it was Eclipse?” Said Ila. But there was no answer, “Eclipse!” Said Ila again. “Eclipse, why are you ignoring us?” Said Bella. Then Ila and Bella both turn around to face Eclipse, but when they did, Eclipse was nowhere to be seen. As they stood there in the house wondering what to do they heard screeching noises and screaming coming from outside.
Then they heard the murmuring again and Eclipse’s voice too. “Where are you?” Said a deep voice “I said WHERE ARE YOU!” Said the deep voice again, but it was very faint. “What was that?” Said Bella “I don’t know. Any idea what we are going to do? Because Eclipse’s parents aren’t here AND THERE IS A RANDOM VOICE SAYING ‘WHERE ARE YOU’ ? ” Replied Ila “ Well I don’t know. All I know is THAT ECLIPSES PARENTS AREN’T HERE!” Said Bella.
“Well this lounge is the place that ECLIPSE WENT POOF and we can’t find her?!” Said Ila, Then Ila and Bella heard the murmuring and yelling again. So Ila and Bella ran upstairs as fast as they could to Eclipse bedroom.
They were huffing and puffing. Then they saw Eclipse sitting on her bed in the corner. “What’s wrong?” Said Ila, “I don’t know.” Replied Eclipse shaking. The three girls agreed to go outside to get some fresh air and check out the barn. They headed downstairs and outside. As they were walking near the bushes the moonlight showed the way, Eclipse started to scream again. “WHAT?!” Shouted Ila “There… Was a m-man there in the bushes and h-e was holding an axe.” Replied Eclipse. “Well um… Let’s walk a lot faster then.” Said Ila. As they were walking they all heard the whispering but now they could hear it a lot more clearly this time he was saying “Come on WHERE are YOU. Come out of hiding.. Eclipse.”
“That voice.. Is um.” Said Bella “What is that voice? Do you know them? Do I KNOW THEM?!” Replied Eclipse. Bella didn’t answer at all “BELLA tell me right now!” Said Eclipse, “ Ok ok, I will tell you when we get to the barn.” Replied Bella. They walked for another couple of minutes towards the barn. Once there, Ila said “Ok Bella it’s time for the TRUTH!.”, “Ok. I will tell you who it is.” Replied Bella. Bella told the girls about how she could see and talk to ghosts. He was Bellas only friend when she was 4 in a half. After that Ila and Eclipse were both SHOCKED about revelations. “ YOU KNOW HIM THE WHOLE TIME!?” Shouted Eclipse. “ I KNOW I said I didn’t know, but it wasn’t very clear the FIRST TIME!” Replied Bella.“WELL SINCE YOUR ghost friend is following us.” Eclipse was interrupted by the murmuring voice again but this time it said “Well now you’ve got me but can you catch me?” Said the ghost voice.
Eclipse and her friends ran towards the voice, as it got louder and louder they freaked out so they turned around and ran away. They were panicking but for some reason Bella wasn’t. Bella was just standing there, very still not moving an inch. “Bella, why are you so CALM!? Yelled Eclipse. Bella still didn’t answer. As she went to move forwards she tripped and fell into a bush. Eclipse and Ila went to help her up and in a blink of an eye, Bella was gone. Eclipse and Ila both yelled “Where are YOU!”. When they got no answer from Bella the voice said “Go back to the barn you’re not safe anymore.” Eclipse and Ila ran, not to the barn into the forest. To this day, Ila, Bella and Eclipse were never to be seen again. The house is still haunted by the, murmuring voice, Bellas’ only childhood friend.
What are your thoughts about my story?
Do you think I should add an other story?
This is a copy of mine but my TEACHER Ms Lang is going to check it and then I will do another one but it might be DIFFERENT!