week 9 term 1 writting

hey blogs for  writing this week we have to do something called  claw it is the thing that i am post to do and i did it now i have to blog my writing  also  it was about a roller coaster in a  carnival full of people and a lot of roller coaster and stuff and thing i will put all my work below i will put a link if the link do not work i will put the story words below and also can you pls comment my spelling mistake and all thing and good thing and bad and pls comment ok bye bye bye bye have a good day.

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the story

The claw

When I walk into the theme park.I see a lot of rides. In the back of my eye I see a giant yellow and blue ride. I see and hear people happy and scared and also cryI also see the name of the roller coaster is the claw i walk to the ride and the worker said to wait and after I can go.how is it my turn .When i sit down i hear a  robot says fasten your seatbelt launching in 3 2 1 ! go. In the start is going slow slow and gradually it goes faster and 

faster and spinner and spinner.Also more dizzy.The wind goes hard into my face.The people scream  and cry and faint also some are happy also some  are  calm some vomit some enjoy it.

 I wonder what happens if I jump  off also when this ride ends.Now the ride ends so i am going to claw 2 and all the other rides.Also i see the god  roller coaster  but in the 1 claw it was not scary  but yea..

                                                                            the end   The end  the end bye