Holiday Recount
WALT: create a recount with a beginning, middle and end.
When people read this recount they should feel interested and excited. This week you are going to create a recount about your holiday, this can be real or made up! Use the class brainstorm to help you get started:
| Introduction
Who, what, where, when, how and why? |
Mum and neighbours and me omoto valley road mum was showing me a dead deer mum nearly flipped the car. |
| Beginning
What happened first? |
Me and mum were driving home from McDonalds and she wanted to show me a dead deer. When she was backing up she drove into a ditch so she called John who has a tow truck. |
| Middle
What happened in the middle? |
James Our other neighbour came over and he went to get some shovels to dig a path so it will be easier to tow it out but me and Wilbaer were still in the car. |
| End
What happened at the end? |
John came and towed the car out but in the process my ham burger got squashed by my dog. |
| Conclusion
How did you feel about your experience? |
I felt hungry and scared but it was funny at the same time. |
Start your writing here
THE DAY THE CAR NEARLY FLIPPED!!!!
→Mum and I were driving home from McDonalds and mum wanted to show me a dead deer on our driveway. She backed up but when she was backing the car fell into a ditch. She made the car nearly go on its side so she got out and left me in it!
When mum got out she called a tow truck and he was one of our neighbours. He said he will be there in 30 minutes. Then James drove by and said he has a shovel so he could dig a little trench and it will be easier to get the car out.
When the tow truck arrived I was still in the car and my dog Wilbaer was squishing and scratching everything. Then he squished my ham burger so I couldn’t eat it because there was a bunch of hair in it. While that was happening the tow truck towed us out of the ditch. Then we drove home.