For the past week, I have been working on my Adventures Are the Pits writing. We have been working on our description in our writing, so we watched a video and had to be really descriptive to show the reader what the footage would exactly look like. I have spent a lot of time on it, and I hope you like my work:
I braced myself for a very knobbly ride down the dirty orange, steep, wobbly slide. I took a look with fear, then looked away as I filled up with even more trembling horror. I took a deep breath and aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! OOF!, OOF!, OOF!.
Now that was one bumpy ride. I ended up in this mysterious place that I think nobody has been down. The place had a weird, mucky stench that I couldn’t explain. The place that I was in was huge and dark, and a bit creepy, and had a really tall, colourful ball tower in the centre. I couldn’t see the bottom; I thought it would be intense.
After I took a fearful look around the yucky mucky place and thought (If I want to get out, I would have to climb this very tall, colorful ball tower that had all sorts of weird gewy stuff on it and get out.)
I strutted halfway up the very gunky, colorful ball tower and slipped over this green, mysterious object. But luckily, I managed to hold onto this purple, sharp lollipop, which was very dirty. It had a dirt mark with a long stick to keep it upright.
I gripped the lollipop stick as hard as I could so I wouldn’t fall into the deep void, so I continued to strut up the munky gunky colorful ball tower.
Guess what, I made it out of the mysterious void, colorful ball pit that had a mysterious stench that no one could explain. I was so happy I stuck that dirty, gunky purple lollipop right in my mouth, and did the happiest little dance ever.
The End.
I hoped you liked my writing. Have a good day!