Karoro Gala Day
Last weekend we had our annual Gala day at school. This week you are going to create a recount about the day. Remember to think about all of the things that you really enjoyed doing. If you didn’t come to the gala you can write about another event you have been involved in.
Planning
| Order | Planning notes |
| Intro: 5Ws | Me and Poppy
went to the gala on Saturday 11am-2pm on the 8th 2025 |
| Paragraph 1 | Me and poppy went together and there were hardly any parking spots left so we had to park across the street |
| Paragraph 2 | I spent $20 at the chocolate wheel and 3 tickets to the chocolate wheel. Poppy spent $40. I got six bars of chocolate and Poppy got eight bars of chocolate.my sister came back from choir and she won a plushy from a claw machine and it looks so cute. |
| Paragraph 3 | When I had more I traded people for money for chocolate then copper traded me for 3 old tickets then he ran away with 2 bars of chocolate . Then I ran after him and he said he sold it for five dollars each and I told him I never had that chocolate .Then I bought a balloon. |
| Conclusion | When Mienke my sister came she had a look around then me and poppy went home to her house then I got my ballon got stuck on they ruffe |
Now that you have finished your plan, start writing your story. Don’t forget:
- Who, what, when, where, why to introduce the event.
- Write it in an order of events.
- Be descriptive, share as many details as you can.
- Use correct sentence punctuation, and try experimenting with others.
- Group your ideas into paragraphs.
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Start your writing here:
→Me and Poppy
went to the gala on Saturday 11am-2pm on the 8th 2025.Me and poppy went together and there were hardly any parking spots left so we had to park across the street.
I spent $20 at the chocolate wheel and 3 tickets to the chocolate wheel. Poppy spent $40
. I got six bars of chocolate and Poppy got eight bars of chocolate.my sister came back from choir and she won a plushy from a claw machine and it looks so cute.I bought an oreo cheesecake because we were so hungry.When the noise subsided,I had overjoyed because I the chocolate wheel then I only had $2 left so I bought a ticket for test your strength then I almost got I winning ticket but it did not get high enough to win.
When I had more I traded people for money for chocolate wheel then copper traded me for 3 old tickets then he ran away with 2 bars of chocolate. Then I ran after him and he said he sold it for five dollars each and I told him I never had that chocolate .Then I bought a balloon and we went to her house and We went down to the creek and we went fishing and swimming and we saw a crawley so we went back and got some expired ham and string. We tried to catch it but it went under a rock. This is very good