My goal-
Make sure my sentences make sense when read individually.
Use a thesaurus to come up with interesting vocabulary.
Use sensory details to enhance my writing.
Use figurative language in my writing.
Hook my reader in.
Punctuate dialogue correctly.
Write in paragraphs.
If you have another goal in mind, check with your teacher.
It was 20 BC, and the weather was predicted to be HEAVY rain for 8 months.
So along came some dude named Chris. He was going to save all the animals in the country of New Zealand. Except he didn’t know it yet. In fact he didn’t even know the weather so how would he eventually know that he was going to save a bunch of animals. Well lets just see how it plays out.
Hey Chris, it’s school time you will be late, hurry up. We have a boat making class.
You are late, grab a chair and sit down, next time you are late, you will get detention. Sorry Mr Dan Fart Now balbalblablblblbblabkhbkhbakabhkahbakhbakhbakahbakhbakhabkabhkahbakhabkahbkabhkh alright you understand.
Nooooo.
Alright Good.