what is a good persuasive writing.

We have been learning about a forest in our persuasive writing.

What was challenging was putting a forest in my writing.

Have you used a forest in your writing?

 Why we should have a zoo in our school 

Do you think school should have a zoo? I think yes because it would be great ,and when a kid is angry you can take them to the zoo and calm them down.

When you have awesome animals always and when you are learning about an animal you can go to the zoo. You got to feed the animals but it could be a learning experience for the kids. And it could be something for the kids in room 4 and 5 or some kids that have disabilities and kids that have adhd. Do you agree with me about our school having a zoo? But where are we going to get the animals from? When you have a zoo you can pat the animals and when you have different animals it is like you have your own zoo. In the zoo you could  ask Matua if you could choose an animal like a cat dog and so many more not like a lion tiger or elephant.When you are feeding the animals you can pat them and they are going to be so cut and soft do you like animals if you are allergic can you please stay away from them . When you don’t have a pet at home just come here there will be a zoo here. When you have to pay for food for the animals, don’t worry because the community will pay if they want to . But there are some not fun parts like cleaning their cage.  

 

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