Ding went the oven, “Ohh my chocolate cakes are ready” sang grandma Aisling
“Huh what’s that smell?” questioned Betty, skipping in the forest. Betty decided to follow the smell.
She tipped toed out of the forest and into the vege patch.
Then into the flower garden.
Then finally she smelt the most delicious smelling thing she has ever smelt in her whole life. Betty looked around trying to find the smell, but then when she looked back she saw a rainbow castle full of lollies and cake. “WOW!” exclaimed Betty
“Huh what was that noise?” Questioned Grandma Ailsing.
“I think I will go in and check it out,” Betty whispered to herself. Betty walked to the doorway and knocked on the door, “Hello is anyone there?” Betty shouted
“Huh who’s there, no one has ever stepped foot here in five years” Grandma Aisling said scarcely. As Aisling tipped toed to the door wondering who was there.
When she got to the door she looked through the peep hole and saw a little girl with fiery orange hair. When Grandma Aisling opened the door she asked “ What is the need for you to be here?”
“ Ummm I just smelt a really yummy smell and decided to follow it, and it led me here” Betty replied.
“Ohhh yes, those are my chocolate cakes, would you like to try some?” Offered Grandma Aisling.
“Umm I really shouldn’t” Denied Betty.
“Ohhh come on don’t worry I’m not going to kidnap you, if that’s what you’re worried about?” Said Grandma Aisling.
“ Well okay then” Agreed Betty. As Betty walked into the house she saw candies, icing, muffins, and cakes. “Wow you have a great house” exclaimed Betty.
“Well thank you” Thanked Grandma Aisling
“Here are the cakes, take whatever one you want” Said Grandma Aisling.
“OMG thank you so much!” Shouted Betty. As Betty took one of her favourite cakes she smiled at Grandma Aisling and said “Goodbye thank you so much, I hope you have an amazing day” Betty said nicely.
“Goodbye,” replied Grandma Aisling. Betty trotted of back to her house happy like a butterfly.
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