Narrative: Superhero
This week you are going to create a story about your very own superhero. As we are learning about the Fonofale you will base your superhero on one of the Four Pou of the Fonofale.
Planning
| Describe your superhero: | My superhero will wear a green shirt that has the initials MB for his name. He will be a guy. And he will wear pants that are green then he will wear black shorts over the pants. He will have a cape on his back that has the word physical on it. And he will have brown short hair with blue eyes and have a green mask on his face but it has holes through the eyes so you can see his eyes. |
| Describe your villain: | My villain will wear a red shirt that has the initials GS for his name, he will be a guy. And he will wear red pants and black shorts over the pants. He will have a cape on his back and he will have black short hair, with red eyes and he will also have a red mask on his face but the mask has holes near the eyes so you can see his eyes. |
| What kind of powers do they have? | The superhero’s powers will be- taking care of their bodies, exercising and eating healthy.
The villain’s powers will be – destroy people’s sleep and make them unfit and unhealthy also for the people to not exercise.
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| What is the problem? | The problem is that the villain is destroying everything and the superhero can’t control him because he is getting too much out of hand. Also the villain is jealous of people glazing the superhero too much and wants to get glazed. |
| What is the solution? | The solution is to help out the villain by turning him good, and helping him to get glazed but he needs to learn how to be good and help the world. |
| Beginning | Once upon a time, a world filled with very bad and selfish people, turned into a world with very kind and compassionate people that helped each other and cared for each other everyday. |
| Middle | Until one day a very bad person came and flipped the whole world upside down. He ruined everything, He started to make people sleep in and go to sleep late. He also started to make people unhealthy, and make them not exercise. and started so much drama, he was the one and only Galactic storm. Until the hero of all time came to save the day Mega bolt he was the one and only trustworthy hero everyone could trust. Until something very bad happened, Galactic storm started a huge fight between Mega Bolt. And they couldn’t stop arguing until Galactic storm said ‘we’ll settle this once and for all we will have a massive fight tomorrow’ Mega Bolt had nothing to say except ‘sure I guess’. So the next day came and Mega Bolt and Galactic storm were both ready to fight, a whole crowd came to watch them fight it was very terrifying. And then the moment happened and the fight started. Galactic storm was beating up Mega Bolt, until Mega Bolt decided to go full bolt mode on Galactic storm. The shock on the crowd’s faces was insane, and then Mega bolt threw the last punch that knocked out Galactic storm so bad he travelled 20,000 km across the world all the way to Spain. Everyone jumped and clapped their hands in excitement that finally there will be no more drama all thanks to Mega Bolt, he got so glazed after what happened and everyone thanked him for his service to the world. |
| End | Then after a few days of being a peaceful country Galactic storm came back but not to cause any drama but to apologise to everyone for not being a good person and ruining everyone’s life. But Galactic storm was telling everyone how jealous he became of Mega Bolt, and saw how much he got glazed and wanted that same treatment. But then Mega Bolt came and heard what Galactic storm was saying and told him that ‘It’s not really about getting glazed, it’s more about helping out the world do the right thing but while you serve your people you will just end up getting glazed in the process’. Galactic storm felt really touched by what Mega Bolt said and told him he wants to be just like Mega Bolt and serve the world, Mega Bolt said ‘to do that you will have to gain the people’s trust so they can trust you. So Galactic storm asked the whole world if they can forgive him for what he has done and if he can gain their trust to help Mega Bolt save the world. Mega Bolt already forgave him and gave him his trust to help him save the world; it was just the people he needed. So everyone stands up strong and says we forgive you Galactic storm and we give our full trust in you to help Mega Bolt save the world, and after that Galactic storm and Mega Bolt became an unstoppable superhero duo that goes to show people can change. |
Start your writing here
Once upon a time, a world filled with very bad and selfish people, turned into a world with very kind and compassionate people that helped each other and cared for each other everyday.
Until one day a very bad person came and flipped the whole world upside down. He ruined everything, He started to make people sleep in and go to sleep late. He also started to make people unhealthy, and make them not exercise. and started so much drama, he was the one and only Galactic storm. Until the hero of all time came to save the day Mega bolt he was the one and only trustworthy hero everyone could trust. Until something very bad happened, Galactic storm started a huge fight between Mega Bolt. And they couldn’t stop arguing until Galactic storm said ‘we’ll settle this once and for all we will have a massive fight tomorrow’ Mega Bolt had nothing to say except ‘sure I guess’. So the next day came and Mega Bolt and Galactic storm were both ready to fight, a whole crowd came to watch them fight it was very terrifying. And then the moment happened and the fight started. Galactic storm was beating up Mega Bolt, until Mega Bolt decided to go full bolt mode on Galactic storm. The shock on the crowd’s faces was insane, and then Mega bolt threw the last punch that knocked out Galactic storm so bad he travelled 20,000 km across the world all the way to Spain. Everyone jumped and clapped their hands in excitement that finally there will be no more drama all thanks to Mega Bolt, he got so glazed after what happened and everyone thanked him for his service to the world.
Then after a few days of being a peaceful country Galactic storm came back but not to cause any drama but to apologise to everyone for not being a good person and ruining everyone’s life. But Galactic storm was telling everyone how jealous he became of Mega Bolt, and saw how much he got glazed and wanted that same treatment. But then Mega Bolt came and heard what Galactic storm was saying and told him that ‘It’s not really about getting glazed, it’s more about helping out the world do the right thing but while you serve your people you will just end up getting glazed in the process’. Galactic storm felt really touched by what Mega Bolt said and told him he wants to be just like Mega Bolt and serve the world, Mega Bolt said ‘to do that you will have to gain the people’s trust so they can trust you. So Galactic storm asked the whole world if they can forgive him for what he has done and if he can gain their trust to help Mega Bolt save the world. Mega Bolt already forgave him and gave him his trust to help him save the world; it was just the people he needed. So everyone stands up strong and says we forgive you Galactic storm and we give our full trust in you to help Mega Bolt save the world, and after that Galactic storm and Mega Bolt became an unstoppable superhero duo that goes to show people can change.