Writing:The Seven Chicks

This week we have been practicing writing complete sentences with punctuation spelling and grammar all correct. This is the writing of my favourite image. 

 

The Seven Chicks:

 

 

 

 

My Story:

There is a different combination of colours on the little chicks standing on the edge of the puddle.

There reflection is showing on the puddle.They look so angry like they are going to do something.

The little chicks are standing in a rowline.

These little chicks are silently staring at something but one thing we have to figure out is what are they looking at?

The chicks have different colours on their webbed feet.

I think some of them are siblings because there are two pinkish chicks, and two black chicks.

It looks like the rain just calmed down after heavy rain happened.

I think these little chicks are standing on the edge of a puddle because they were trying to go home but the puddle was in their way!

One think I like about this picture is that they are all different.

 

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