Creative Writing, Term 3, Week 6

This week  my goal is to “Write in paragraphs”. Here is my writing and the picture I based it off…

My breathing came in ragged gasps. My heart beat against my ribs like a tiger trying to escape its cage. Beads of sweat trickled down my dirty face. My hands were damp against the cold, stone wall. I closed my eyes and took in a deep, long breath. I knew that I would have to be silent if I was going to survive. 

I silently shifted deeper into the shadows and became as silent as a grave. I sensed a strange, damp, mist darkening the air, so I opened my eyes, making sure to keep my head completely still. The air thickened immensely and I fought back the urge to cough.

“You can run, but you can’t hide. I will find you. I am everywhere.”

As suddenly as the fog had come, it vanished. I breathed a sigh of relief, but waited for a few more minutes to make sure I was safe. As safe as I could be anyway. I peeked around one of the walls of the alley and looked both ways. Nothing and nobody in sight.

(I haven’t finished yet)

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