Task description: I have recently been given the task to convince my teacher and others that fashion designing is the true career for me. I have written this piece of it on google docs before I published it to my class companion writing tool. The class companion thankfully analysed it for me and pointed out a few places where my writing was weak. Such as a few grammar mistakes, which were just an extra space in a few places of my writing.
After I let the class companion tool analyse my writing I started to edit my writing, trying to find the places that I could improve on. I spent quite a while on this, though when I submitted one last time ( which in this case was my last submit) I only got 26/30 points in the scoring system. I wasn’t sad at the score it just felt like, the parts I edited weren’t the right place to edit. Due to this, I went back onto google docs to re-read my whole writing piece, and I have highlighted the changes I made. In my mind, I am pretty proud of the edited version of my writing and I feel like it was better than the last. So the moral of this writing story, is to take feedback seriously and to properly re-read your writing to find places to improve on
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