my literacy blog,week 6 term 3 for my writing

Here’s my writing: “Break!” Each step sound “break!”,the bruised twilight with likely no stars only four stars that’s I saw from the bruised twilight sky,I trip face first I had tripped over a twig I look around my face fulled with tiny sticks “Ow!” I look over and break the twigs and I stand back up I find a door leading to a cooled air place it was creepy and I accidently fall backwards and fall into a waterfall I get and my hair and clothes socked in water my legs were the only thing dry but it went wet when I had stand up I look around and just sit down stare at the lovely sky.the end