Every week we make a different story about a picture. This week we wrote about a kid pilot. This is my favourite paragraph.
WHOOSH! Timmy zoomed through the sky at 650 miles per hour. Timmy was going so fast that the wind was blowing his blonde hair back. His small feet and hands reached for the accelerator. His skinny body with small jeans and a blue t-shirt were so bright they intimidated the birds. The helmet he had on was about ten sizes too big and was going to fall any second now, but he didn’t care because he was having so much fun. His big smile was brighter than the sun.
Quick write is one of my favourite subjects in school.
