Walt: Read for understanding
My favourite part of the story was when the gruffalo came because it had vivid description and it was building tension, drama, and made the story interesting and not boring
Something I found challenging was choosing what I would put for the description of the mouse because there was a lot of details and I could just keep going forever
What do you think of this story or my work?
I forgot to put the crimes so here they are:
- Tricking animals
- Threatening/Scaring animals