We have been learning about persuasive writing. We learnt about the structure and emotive language. Enjoy my story about Vanilla icecream
Vanilla ice cream the ultimate summer NZ ice cream! Without doubt vanilla is the ultimate treat. Have you ever had the opportunity to taste pure white heaven?
First of all the delicious taste of bright white ice cream is topped off with a creamy texture. Inside. Vanilla ice cream is not complex in taste and not as plain as Chocolate, or Goody goody gumdrops. It can go with Milkshakes and i like Vanilla ice cream milkshakes. That is why Vanilla ice cream is the best.
Secondly the best Vanilla ice cream smells good – just like flower. It makes people want to eat it just like the smell we get from the Griffins biscuit factory .
Lastly you must try 2 vanilla ice cream scoops because it is the greatest ice cream in the Milky Way. In conclusion, I strongly believe that vanilla ice cream is the ultimate ultimate champions of the Milky Way. Everyone knows that it tastes delicious it has the perfect texture and it is the undisputed champion of the freezer. Try a scoop today before it runs out !
by Noah Walker Nash
September 2026