During writing, we have been focusing on persuasive writing.
I could choose what topic I wanted.So I chose SCHOOL HOLIDAY SHOULD BE LONGER!!!.
My task was to…
- make my plan
- write my writing in my book.
- Get it checked by a teacher.
- Publish.
- blog.
I am happy about my work because I AGREE ON MY WRITING>:)
Something I felt challenging having to restart.:(
~SCHOOL HOLIDAYS SHOULD BE LONGER~
We should have longer school holidays because school is everyday for six hours and sometimes we just need a break.It is a fantastic opportunity to relax,play,and spend time with friends and family.I will now tell you why school holidays are important.
- School is a big part of the day and resting more can make students more happy. 2. Longer holidays can allow us to refresh our brains. So when we start school,we can carry new learning into our brains.And finally 3. When students relax,they will be more willing to learn. When students are happy,
They can do all sorts of helpful things!An example could be:The teacher is holding the door for everyone and someone says: “I can help.”And hold the door. Doesn’t that feel nice?Another reason could be: that one student who ALWAYS talks on the mat and suddenly,he’s just sitting there giving five”.I’m in a good mood today:)”He says.That would also be nice.
And refreshing our brains helps us to calm down. And maybe your class will be very peaceful. Also, like I said, refreshing our brains helps us carry new learning into our brains.This also means we can feel fresh too.Homework takes time also! You will have time to do that.
If we had longer school holidays we would love school! Everyday would be amazing.Maybe even every second!And not only does this help students, but this also helps teachers too. Have a think.
Would you like that?