Since it’s blurry. this is what it says. How to sneek past a sleeping dragon? well guess what, ill take time out of my day to tell you step by step! Step one: put on just socks so stealth mode is activaded. Step two: be like a ninja and tiptoe as quiet as you can. No mistakes can be made! step three: Do not make a noise! Its very important, and a key thing to remember when trying to sneak past a sleeping dragon! step four: If there are obsticals again, be like a ninja in stealth mode. slowly walk over it, stretch your legs wide enough to pass the obstical. steep five: leave the cave! you made it! good job!
2 things I learned, needed punctuation, and focusing on the topic.
I liked, the topic because it was very interesting.
I want to improve on adding more words, and being more descriptive.
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