We were learning about writing persuasive emails with Whaea Ocea.
We also learnt about our digital footprint – this is all about what we post online and how it stays online so
we need to make sure it is positive.
We were writing emails to our Principal and Deputy Principal to persuade them to get swings. Mr Crowe hasn’t responded yet, but I am looking forward to it.
I found this lesson hard because of all the different steps we needed to do.
This is my email that I sent.
Kia ora Mr Crowe,
I think our school needs more playground equipment for kids to play on like swings. It’s important that we have fun on our breaks and swings are so fun!
If we have fun on our breaks then we can do better learning after.
Thank you,
Yours sincerely,
Karma
