CPR

 

 

Some things that I learned about CPR is how many  beats you have to do in 2 minutes 

The best part about learning  CPR  was  how to save someone

The most frustrating part about   CPR was trying to get the high score 

 

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CPR training with Justin

Yesterday 9LDO had CPR training with Justin, he is a real EMT. Some things I learnt was how to recognize if somebody is choking and how to help, another thing I learnt was how to perform CPR on somebody correctly. We also talked about how to talk to an ambulance officer and what goes on behind the scene. My favourite thing we did was practicing CPR on human-like mannequins and seeing how good of a score on accuracy out of 100 we could get, I got 99%. Here is a photo of Justin our instructor.

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learning to do CPR

Some things that I learned about CPR is sing a song in your head e.g. a good song is ‘Baby Shark’ to get the right pumping speed.

The best part about learning CPR was doing it on a manikin

The most frustrating part about was doing it until 2 mins 

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14/10/24

we are learning to write persuasively

one thing i found challenging about this piece of writing was trying to think about what to write

 

 

 

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Digi tech- photoshop

 

This is what I have been doing in digi

 

How do you make this image by choosing an image then you place text on top of the image then you crop the image into the text then you use different tools to enhance your world that you have choose

 

 

 

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Sophie Pascoe writing grade!

This is the grade I received for my Sophie Pascoe. ( I am very proud of my grade🥰)

These things I did well was understand the film topics, justify the examples with clear explanations, use sexy paragraphs and use technical skills to show I have control over my writing.

My next steps are to use more ambitious words, try not to repeat words and find alternatives that I would say aloud

that don’t make my writing awkward.

Things you’ve done well…

You have done a great job of this essay Paige

  • you understand the film techniques
  • you have justified your examples with clear explanations
  • your paragraphs are SEXY
  • your technical skills show the control you have over your writing and your words flow
Next steps…

I think you could broaden your vocabulary…become a bit more ambitious.

When you are in the crafting phase – have a look for repeated or weak words and look up synonyms or use a thesaurus to find alternatives.

e.g. – you have used the word ‘happy’ on repeat

Make sure you find alternative words that you feel good about using (you understand them and feel like you would say them) so it doesn’t feel    awkward 🙂

Overall Grade:

  • Visual Text Analysis (5A) EXCELLENCE
  • Technical Skills (5A) EXCELLENCE

 

 

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