We are trying to show not tell in this story.

The shoemaker looked so small when he walked through the brown timber door to his little shoe shop. He had all different types of shoes. He had the ones that make you look taller and the ones that you run in. It looked like he had a brown furry rat on under his nose. He wore square glasses over his large dark brown eyes. He had all the little tools to make and fix shoes. But suddenly a wooden brown cart pulls up right outside his shop! The other shoemake had to bend down to go through the short shoemakers door. He had a nose that stuck out like a mountain. He wore a round top hat that was as black as the night. The short shoemaker made some rally nice brown sneakers but the tall shoemaker made the same ones but in red and white! The short shoemaker ended up making a pair of shoes that came alive and gave them to the tall shoemaker and he made the shoes take him far away and out of town.