For the past two weeks we have been learning how to structure our writing in a nice why. Also we have been learning how to put simple sentences in our writing. I have made a story about a tsunami. A little girl named Lucy, and her family they were at home on her brothers b-day ( Dave ) he is 5 turning 6 but know 6 years old. and on his b-day a tsunami warning is set out of the whole of NZ. They get scared and pack there things and leaves. Then to find out For the Tsunami to be fake.My writing goal was in this story was to add more punctuation and more detail. I enjoyed the whole story. What I had found challenging was all the harder works to write. Next time I will improve my spelling.
