We have been learning about where we put our comas and full stops and checking our writing top to bottom.
It was a calm but cool summer day. I got up and I saw a cat so I started chasing it, but the cat had the best reflexes I’ve ever seen. I was so focused on it until I got caught in a net and I ended up at a place with a lot more dogs and cats. A brown headed lady picked me up and put me in a box and then we just started moving?
“Bark bark bark”
Then we stopped moving and then we started flying and finally stopped on something. I could see some sunlight and then the box opened.There was a boy playing his video games he picked me up and seemed to like me until he saw my missing leg he through me on the ground but I thought he was just playing so I barked to get his attention but he kicked me upside down and away then I was while I was looking around a red funny ball it looked like it was on the ceiling but when I flipped over it was on the ground
What the heck? I thought in my head so I got the ball and put it by his feet but he kicked it into a box so I chased but I fell and fell but I was thinking about persevering and then I made it. I had gotten trapped in the box so I put my nose underneath the box and boom I’m out I put the ball by his feet again but he got up and went to get his crouchers and when we got to the door he yelled
“MUM WERE JUST GOING TO PLAY OUTSIDE”
But while he was saying that I pushed the door with all my mite and I flung open. When we got outside he threw the ball and I chased then he came over and through it again.
I have done my best to reach my writing goal and have gone back to correct it.