Beep Beep Beep. The alarm clock woke Jim up. Jim got out of bed and walked into the kitchen. The floor was cold and cracked. Jim’s feet tingled with pins and needles. He grabbed a small pan and placed it on the stove. Sizzle! He poured the oil onto the pan before grabbing out his metal phone. He unlocked his car using his phone. After eating half a sausage he quickly ran to his car the alarm was going off. He tried to switch it off but it kept screeching. He turned the car off and got in. The seat was burning Jim yelled and smacked his seat ‘’what the heck’’ his pants burned.

3 hours later. 

Jim was at work finally. The store had old oil tanks and his rusty car out the front. He waited until someone needed to fuel. Ding ding! The door bell rang and someone had walked in. It was a child holding 5 bucks. His clothes looked old and he had a brown hat with leather falling off it. Jim stared at the child as he roamed the isles. But then Jim noticed the child had a little dart. Jim yelled at the child loudly before almost getting hit by the dart. Jim grabbed the bat from underneath the counter ‘’get back home kid’’ he yelled before throwing the bat at the child. The child laid on the cold itchy floor with stains all over. His eye was swollen and bulged with little cuts dripping blood. The child was filled with rage and sadness. He left the shop stomping the ground and hitting shelves as he screamed and left.

Jim was still processing what happened. The dart was still stuck in the wall; it looked old and poison was dripping and running down the wall. He laid his hands on the cold dart. Steam was rising from it. The minute he laid his hands on the dart it burned. His hand was red and had several scratches. The poison had made its way in. Jim could feel the burning sensation. His nose burned as he sniffed the fumes of the poison. His eyes went watery and red. His stomach growled. He laid his hands on the wall and tried to reach the phone but he was unlucky the poison went faster than anything. It would reach his brain in no time. His body fell and when he landed dust glided around. His skin started to steam with poison as he laid on the floor. The last thing he saw was the dart stuck in the wall. 

20 days earlier.

Jim was in the city. He walked towards a tall building. The words out the front of the building were ‘’Old Doctors’’ he slowed down as he approached the door. People rushed around inside the building. He could hear slamming doors, people screaming in phones and trays being slammed into walls. Jim pushed his hand slowly against the door. Crash! He hit a woman rushing over to another office ‘’I’m terribly sorry!’’ he said before moving on. The woman had a mark on her head from the impact ‘’ow,’’ she cried. Jim approached a child wearing a cap that looked as if it was his fathers. Jim bent down and came face to face with the small child ‘’is that your mother?’’ he said before pointing to the woman crying. The child showed Jim a dart ‘’Yes’’.

This is my story in case you don’t already know.

And yes I am doing this to be very distracting and annoying.

Just giving you extra to read.

Okay stop reading this text now.

listen please.

just stop already.

There was a guy and he really liked soup and so did his feet. This guy’s name was Johnny and he had a friend named Frederick and Frederick helped Johnny when he needed help. Johnny likes to eat soup and when he is finished eating his soup he puts his bowl of soup on the ground and puts his feet in it. After Johnny is finished eating his soup and putting his feet in his soup Frederick would take the bowl away and clean the bowl.  Frederick lived in a little house next door to Johnny. Johnny had very big feet and a very big nose. Frederick was very small and could fly. When Johnny put his feet in the soup it felt very slimy. Frederick would go back to her house next door to Johnnys house at night and come bach in the morning. Frederick new to come back to Johnny when he got out of bed because Johnny was so fat that fredrick could hear him walking around from at her house. When Frederick got to Johnnys house she got greeted by his big nose with a piece of soup on his nose. Frederick didn’t like being able to see Johnnys big nose with soup dripping off of it.

My goal is to use sensory details to enhance my writing. Hope you like my story

As me and my crew put the last of the stuff into the ships we set sail for Bermuda triangle and that it would take us about 9 days of rough waters the first few days were a blur of looking at maps, eating and obliging to the captions commands about getting him status reports on where we were and the number of supplies we had left when i told him that we were low on our 5th day “ boss we only have enough supplies to last one more day” I whispered “if you don’t fix this your dead” yelled caption. On the fifth day a huge storm hit and flipped our ship. Everyone was hurrying to find the extra boats and save as many supplies as possible. Me and some others passed out and woke up on a rocky beach. As we were exploring we found a cave and headed inside. It felt like we were walking for an hour until one of the survivors found a flight of ancient stairs made of limestone that were so fragile that if you looked at them wrong they would collapse. We went down and found this massive stone head the guy behind us must of set of a trap then the head was like a giant vacuum and sucked us in to this massive tunnel that to us to Atlantis city as we were going down there was horrific scent that smelt of sulphur and rotten fish and this screaming sound when we got down the tunnel some of the guys tried to climb out but as they slid down a hole opened up and they fell in so i was the only one left to explore the lost city that was in algae mess.

13.08.26

My goal was to use figurative language in my writing

Glurpol didn’t like his new job very much, it was as horrible as his last, maybe even worse! His last job had been cleaning toilets in a posh house owned by the duke of Easton, it had been gross because the Duke was prone to serious diarrhoea, so he had left that job only to find the one job available, was cleaning royal soldiers’ gross feet! When he saw it he thought it can’t be as bad as cleaning the duke’s toilets, but it was much much worse! He wasn’t just cleaning any soldier’s feet, he was cleaning the ogre army’s feet! They were the best soldiers in all of Kridel! They were as slow as sloths, but as strong as saltwater crocodiles which made them great for frontline battles against the neighbouring Kingdom called cruven Empire, Glurpol didn’t mind having to stay in the army basecamp, it was nice and provided him a place to sleep, but the ogres feet stunk so bad, if they took off their boots the other soldiers around them would faint from the horrid smell, it was as bad as cow dung! On glurpols very first day, he was handed a bucket, a cloth, and a peg for his little blue nose! His first ogre of the day was brave Billy, the best ogre in all the land! He sat down and looked around in his bag for something, he didn’t talk much just watched as glurpol cleaned his stinky feet.

02/07/26

My goal was to write in paragraphs

I didn’t finish my story

I had lived in this tower all of my life, with Grayson and Julie. They raised me since birth in this little gray tower, in the pink forest of forgetting.

Everyday was the same, get up, help Julie cook breakfast and fold the washing, then, my favourite part of the day, going foraging with Gray and Squaker, my magnificent eagle who followed me everywhere I went. But I could not stay here all my life, unlike Julie and Gray who were content with living this simple life,

I wanted more, I wanted to take back my Kingdom of Brekya, and someday I would, but first I needed to convince my protectors, Grayson and Julie that I was capable of looking after myself.

I was a forgotten princess as Julie liked to say, because when the Istetis Empire had invaded the Brekya Kingdom The King, my father had given me to his most trusted servant, Grayson, and his wife, Julie.

My twin, Lucy Harchester had been taken to the Doreren Kingdom well the Worst War in the history of Yesea went on for 4 years, 7 months, 2 weeks and 3 days. I knew that number so well because at the age of 5 when I had been told by my dear father, the king, to listen to Grayson and his wife, no matter what happened until, he came to take me back. I remember his words like yesterday,

“ Avery, you must listen to Grayson, he’s the best man I have ever known and when this war is over and our kingdom has won, I will come and get you from the gray tower in the pretty pink forest you love.” Soon I realised that the real name of this forest is The forgotten forest.

In the dusk days of 1939 the builders and inventors of Italy were experimenting by building different kinds of robots to help for battle in war as the army was struggling and needed assistance. 

They started off by building tiny robots that were hard for enemies to see, once they detected an enemy base they would self-destruct and blow up. The distance of the destruction went up to a kilometer away. 

After the inventors had sent hundreds of robots to the battle they waited to hear the results from the army. The inventors started planning a design for a backup robot. They decided to make it 4 feet tall and have indestructible metal armour so the enemy’s bullets would bounce back off the armour. Using the enemy’s weapon as their own would be unexpected for the enemies.

“These robots were a great success, but the enemies moved bases after a few weeks, now the robots can’t reach them.” Read Joe, the manager of the robot making. 

“Build and send out the new robots!” Commanded Joe, the team scurried off to their stations to build the different parts of the robots. After the robots were finished the testers had to see if they worked. So the testers shot a bullet and quickly ducked behind a brick wall for safety.

After they waited a few seconds they went around to see the robot had deflected the bullet into the wall with not even a scratch on the robot.

“What are we waiting for then, send the new robots!” Demanded Joe.

Once they heard back from the army the results were winning the war.

My goal is to use words for a dictionary heres my story.

It’s 2075 me, Ava and Millie are hiking on mars the earth imploded with poison gas and mars has clean air. I’m ahead of the group “ hurry up you guys!” I yelled back “were going to be late to the heist” 

“We’ll be fine” wined Ava

“The boss won’t care” Milie persuaded “ he’s an old hag anyway” muttered Millie. A mini tornado of hot air pushed us back blocking our vision with a thick layer of sand on our goggles I heard a big thump then Ava yelling

“I’m good!” then  “hey guys there’s a massive helicopter coming towards us”. Turns out it was just a gigantic bug that is going to be a long hike with Ava’s concussion and Millie being too laid back. Lets just hope the bosses new job customers aren’t too fussy and the job won’t be gruesome. 

“Wait up Sophie you’re too fast” a random voice yelled. I looked behind me and saw Tara sprinting towards me once she caught up and everyone else to their slow time. She explained that the boss was retiring and wanted  to give the whole operation to his most loyal sycophants. 

“See guys there was nothing to worry about” Millie says in a relaxed tone

“So we walked all the way out here for nothing” wined Ava apparently he was give the operation to Sophie 

  “ guys lets go home and rule desert”. 

Bzz! Bzz! Sparks flew up into the air. ‘’How much longer?,’’ Bot asked ‘’days, months, more’’

Replied AI. 

Bot was on a massive power pole in the sky and he had to finish the job within a day. 

Bot kept climbing higher and higher ‘’almost there’’ 

‘’Take your time’’

‘’Im trying’’. 

Bot sat his foot on a tiny metal chunk his foot was slipping but he kept climbing higher.

AI was metres above him. Bot looked down ‘’whoa!’’ his eyes felt like they were zooming out of his face ‘’jeez we’re pretty high up’’. AI looked down as well ‘’agreed’’. The wind was powerful up there and both had to be careful. Suddenly a massive ship started to fly past Creak! It struggled to move ‘’how you guys do”. The robot’s  voice was cut off as the ship started to fly away. They had given Bot and AI a tool crate. They both peeked under the top board ‘’hmm?’’. AI lifted the lid and he stuck his face underneath ‘’aah!’’. He screamed Bot quickly pulled him out ‘’what, what is it?’’ Bot said confused ‘’wire!’’. They were happy they actually have tools now and can get the job finished. Bot climbed up to a small box that had rust covering it. AI passed Bot some tools and they both slowly opened the box. Inside was a small fuse with cracks all over. It had a faint glow and all the other fuses were lifeless. Bot grabbed all the broken fuses and threw them into a small box AI was holding.

Smack! The boss hit his desk with anger. His eyes were filled with red and rage ‘’what’s taking them so long?!’’. He screamed and yelled, shaking his chair. He lived inside a rusty old office, he wanted that to change, he wanted to be a billionaire. He held his pen tight in his hands and wrote the day away. His hands were aching from all the writing, he kept going. ‘’Yes finally!’’ he scrunched up the letter and smacked it into the pipe. 

Swoosh! The letter was dropped off at the radio tower ‘’news!’’ AI grabbed it with his cold rusty hand. He opened the letter and flattened it out. He scanned word by word until he knew why the letter was here. He quickly shouted to Bot to work faster, handing him all sorts of tools. Bot was struggling ‘boss will kill us!’’ He grabbed a laser and zapped the box away. It was freezing and the laser was flickering, giving up. The computer turned on to reveal the boss’s face ‘’hurry up!’’ he screamed. AI tried giving boss answers but it wasn’t enough. Bot threw a wrench on the computer shutting it ‘’hey!’’ AI wasn’t very happy but neither was the boss.

The boss was angry. Really angry. His coffee was cold and had been sitting for days straight. He picked it up hoping for a sip. Nothing. He opened up the old rusty computer and rebooted the system. He couldn’t restart it. ‘’No!’’ he yelled and began smashing his metal fists onto the top and sides of the computer. It glitched and began showing code. The metal titan grabbed the computer and smashed it onto his solid spiked knee. It snapped in half he yelled before grabbing the two halves and clamped them onto the sides of his head.

Clank! Bot dropped the wrench before falling to his knees ‘’it’s over’’ he said with a soft voice. AI looked in the direction Bot was looking. There was a massive ship with cannons all over. AI picked up a small box and threw it off the side of the tower. He stared at the 

massive ship. Its cannons started to glow and make a loud rumble. It charged up and made a low rumbling sound. It kept going, getting brighter and louder. Until. Boom! A giant burst of flames consumed the tower. The boss watched and smiled ‘’I’ll sell the tower then’’. He grabbed the broken computer and stitched it up ‘’alright should be fixed enough’’. He plugged the broken cord into the broken wall and flicked the broken switch. The computer booted up and made a high pitched squealing noise screeeeeeeeech! ‘’Ow stop stop, James U-P-L-U-G I-T!!!’’. James the mini bot quickly jumped over to the switch and he, and he missed. James hit the floor and snapped the cord entirely. The cord flung up and smacked the boss in the nose “James!’’ he yelled until the roof collapsed. James escaped but the boss did not. Suddenly the boss rose from the pile of rubble and he had a cord stuck to his face ‘’alright James Y-O-U A-R-E -F-I-R-E-D!!!’’.